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As the wounds start to hurt

Baring the soul inside
Hearing the screams cried

The cold metal
Without a score to settle

As I plead for an encore
The blood and pain I want more

Everytime I ease the pain
There comes more for me to sustain

Along with the forever scars
Like the home I subside in, but of bars

They are my past
And forever they will last

You say I am the only one
That has created my burden

But its really your fault
Because you're the one who took my wounds
And added the salt! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Degraded Effort

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 10:19:38 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dergraded effort
As the wounds start to hurt

Baring the soul inside
Hearing the screams cried

The cold metal
Without a score to settle

As I plead for an encore
The blood and pain I want more

Everytime I ease the pain
There comes more for me to sustain

Along with the forever scars
Like the home I subside in, but of bars

They are my past
And forever they will last

You say I am the only one
That has created my burden

But its really your fault
Because you're the one who took my wounds
And added the salt!

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-04-01 22:19:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Degraded Effort (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 10:34:29 PM AEST
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oh, very nice indeed. reminds me of chevelle and my favorite song by them. "god, the listless sea...the salt enters the wound" im glad that i saw this one, makes me think that this is even better than the cowrite. =] but the way were working on it, the cowrite will never be finished!

Re: Degraded Effort (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:44:27 AM AEST
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A really great write filled with alot of emotion. i loved the way it flowed and the way it was portrayed. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue

Re: Degraded Effort (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenAngel on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:19:26 PM AEST
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Wonderful job writing this.

Re: Degraded Effort (User Rating: 1 )
by white_tiger on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:36:58 PM AEST
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thats a kool poem.....:) i lyk the different stanzas and stuff....they's kool o_) yeh, anyway, great stuff....

huggs and keep smiling

white_tiger

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