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Array ( [sid] => 89627 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hidden Me [time] => 2005-04-02 00:55:29 [hometext] => I wish i could open up to the world but its so hard [bodytext] => I am hidden,
From the world in all its light and darkness
For the true me is afraid of chance
The me you see is a see, a fake, a protective covering of my true bean
The true me has only been touched by a few
They knew me,
They peared into my soul
They still did not understand the hidden me
So here i wait for the special someone with the key
To truely unlock the hiddent me
But, until then
the true me will remain the hidden me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Varsity3 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Hidden Me

Contributed by Varsity3 on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 12:55:29 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I am hidden,
From the world in all its light and darkness
For the true me is afraid of chance
The me you see is a see, a fake, a protective covering of my true bean
The true me has only been touched by a few
They knew me,
They peared into my soul
They still did not understand the hidden me
So here i wait for the special someone with the key
To truely unlock the hiddent me
But, until then
the true me will remain the hidden me

Copyright © Varsity3 ... [ 2005-04-02 00:55:29]
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Re: Hidden Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:15:54 AM AEST
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i know haow you feel, secrets hidden from the world, secrets that make up who you are, and Only a few will ever know them. Good job.

Re: Hidden Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:01:34 AM AEST
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This is very relatable. We all hide in ourselves to some extent and wish that a special person would see the jewel inside.

May your wish come true and soon.

Kie

Re: Hidden Me (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:23:23 AM AEST
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This was me. I was the same..
Funny enough...the people from this sit helped me open up, and while no one here truly knows me, they have come closer than anyone else has.

I hope you find some way to open up, too.

Great write, I can relate,
Phil

Re: Hidden Me (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:13:09 AM AEST
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A profound write, good rythem and the powerful emotions are superb.

Jane

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