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The tight linen scaffold yeilding so gently
Your lithesome presence fires deep desire
Igniting seemingly insatiable want, passion

Displayed in the evening's smoky dark
My lips seek refuge within your silohuetted form
Softly brushing the salty hollows as they're met
Dicovering the husky warmth in a soft moan

Quietly, urgently embraced ardor rises
All-in-one, spreading, waging surrender
Fervently, accepting, the stinging heat within
Our grasp, our clasp, tender, our gasp

Lustily exchanged breath and caresses
Sweet flames, held, fanned and savored
Silent ebony air nurtured and explored
Moon-lit night witness to pleasant exhaustion. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 2 [informant] => reprobate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Sensual Sonnata

Contributed by reprobate on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:04:10 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Moon-painted soft, white and languid
The tight linen scaffold yeilding so gently
Your lithesome presence fires deep desire
Igniting seemingly insatiable want, passion

Displayed in the evening's smoky dark
My lips seek refuge within your silohuetted form
Softly brushing the salty hollows as they're met
Dicovering the husky warmth in a soft moan

Quietly, urgently embraced ardor rises
All-in-one, spreading, waging surrender
Fervently, accepting, the stinging heat within
Our grasp, our clasp, tender, our gasp

Lustily exchanged breath and caresses
Sweet flames, held, fanned and savored
Silent ebony air nurtured and explored
Moon-lit night witness to pleasant exhaustion.

Copyright © reprobate ... [ 2005-04-02 11:04:10]
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Re: Sensual Sonnata (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:20:34 AM AEST
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What a wonderful write! I loved your imagery and your flow was perfect...I can see them touch, then touch again.....I loved this line...Our grasp, our clasp, tender, our gasp. Great work....extremely sensual.

Carol

Re: Sensual Sonnata (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 12:52:35 PM AEST
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very beautiful
pix xx

Re: Sensual Sonnata (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:35:35 PM AEST
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The imagery here is wonderful

Re: Sensual Sonnata (User Rating: 1 )
by Sir_Odd87 on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:36:57 PM AEST
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Well written...

Re: Sensual Sonnata (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:23:24 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful. I don't know why you rewrote it. Would 10 chocolate bars and about about a day buy your time? I have nothing but time and love and faith to share.

Dove

Re: Sensual Sonnata (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 2nd September 2007 @ 07:29:45 AM AEST
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Going to take a cold shower. *smiles* Wow, Michael you have got a way with words. This was beautiful in every way.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura

Re: Sensual Sonnata (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 02:31:27 PM AEST
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sigh... damn! you write romance beautifully!

hugs n' love nessa

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*have that with your spagetti mopey pants

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