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Array ( [sid] => 89686 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Won't Be Missed [time] => 2005-04-02 20:51:54 [hometext] => Cowrite with Essentially9 [bodytext] =>

I wonder if you'd miss me
If I took my life away,
Or if you'd be happy
Without the cause of your pain.
You never saw my love for thee,
And you never felt the same.

I feel the darkness in my veins,
Since I know the touch of hurt.
For all this pain you're to blame
With all of my frayed ends burnt.
Using this rusted razor blade
Is all that I've learnt.

You take away my innocence day by day
And make me regret waking to the light.
You leave various bruises full of blame
Screaming that the fault's all mine.
I'll use the serrated blade to end my pain
That you've given me everyday of my life.

My soul's battered and broken
With wounds that bleed
A life of being no one.
Death's all I plea
For my life's just a burden,
And I don't want you to be in misery.

I just want more for you than you wanted for me... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

I Won't Be Missed

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:51:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I wonder if you'd miss me
If I took my life away,
Or if you'd be happy
Without the cause of your pain.
You never saw my love for thee,
And you never felt the same.

I feel the darkness in my veins,
Since I know the touch of hurt.
For all this pain you're to blame
With all of my frayed ends burnt.
Using this rusted razor blade
Is all that I've learnt.

You take away my innocence day by day
And make me regret waking to the light.
You leave various bruises full of blame
Screaming that the fault's all mine.
I'll use the serrated blade to end my pain
That you've given me everyday of my life.

My soul's battered and broken
With wounds that bleed
A life of being no one.
Death's all I plea
For my life's just a burden,
And I don't want you to be in misery.

I just want more for you than you wanted for me...

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-04-02 20:51:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Won't Be Missed (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:14:37 PM AEST
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This was a touching piece, well crafted too. I can so relate to that last line of yours, it seems to be something i can relate to, great write here.

Re: I Won't Be Missed (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:10:59 PM AEST
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You both work well together in writting this. I got lost in the words, its amazing how one can relate to a line they read.

Nancy

Re: I Won't Be Missed (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 04:17:51 AM AEST
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you two write very well together.
well done

Re: I Won't Be Missed (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:41:10 AM AEST
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deep and very well written, you two compliment each other in this write, well done!
pix xx

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