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Array ( [sid] => 89712 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stay With Me Awhile [time] => 2005-04-02 23:52:58 [hometext] => this one isn't about me. its in the view of a girl wanting her bf just to be with her. if that makes sence [bodytext] => 3/30/05
2:53 AM

Why don't you come
Sit with me awhile
Share with me your secrets
Tell all the truths
Maybe some of the lies
Most of all I want you
To stay and cry with me.

Hold me close to your body
Warm my cold heart
Shield from me depression
Grasping to steal my soul
Just stay with me awhile
Tell me you'll never let me go
So I can let my feelings show.

Dry colorful tears
Dripping from my chin
Take my hand in yours
Let me go deep beneath your skin
Show me every depth
There is in love's layers
Don't be one of those
One night stand player's.

Hug me when I'm sad
Kiss me during the night
Say you love me always
Say it when feelings right
Watch sunsets with me
Wake me up at dawn
Just to see swans
Swimming on lagoons misty pond.

Rain drops are falling
Slowly we dance
We talk someday going to France
Write poems about me
How happy we’re together
Say about reasons why we’re one
Than slip it under my pillow
Just after the sun goes down.

Why don't you come
Sit with me awhile
Make my life mean something
Just for a little more while
Shine your light in to my eyes
Promise me the world
I promise to forever be your babygirl.

© Care Strom [comments] => 5 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 43 [informant] => KishaLovesCare126 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Stay With Me Awhile

Contributed by KishaLovesCare126 on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:52:58 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



3/30/05
2:53 AM

Why don't you come
Sit with me awhile
Share with me your secrets
Tell all the truths
Maybe some of the lies
Most of all I want you
To stay and cry with me.

Hold me close to your body
Warm my cold heart
Shield from me depression
Grasping to steal my soul
Just stay with me awhile
Tell me you'll never let me go
So I can let my feelings show.

Dry colorful tears
Dripping from my chin
Take my hand in yours
Let me go deep beneath your skin
Show me every depth
There is in love's layers
Don't be one of those
One night stand player's.

Hug me when I'm sad
Kiss me during the night
Say you love me always
Say it when feelings right
Watch sunsets with me
Wake me up at dawn
Just to see swans
Swimming on lagoons misty pond.

Rain drops are falling
Slowly we dance
We talk someday going to France
Write poems about me
How happy we’re together
Say about reasons why we’re one
Than slip it under my pillow
Just after the sun goes down.

Why don't you come
Sit with me awhile
Make my life mean something
Just for a little more while
Shine your light in to my eyes
Promise me the world
I promise to forever be your babygirl.

© Care Strom




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Re: Stay With Me Awhile (User Rating: 1 )
by dreamer_4_eternity on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 12:25:55 AM AEST
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This poem is VERY well written and really cute!! Good job on this, however in the stanza with "dance" and "France" the rhyming seemd a bit forced, but other than that this was AWESOME!


Re: Stay With Me Awhile (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 04:25:24 AM AEST
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so sweet.well done.


Re: Stay With Me Awhile (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:37:51 AM AEST
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beautifully written, good job


Re: Stay With Me Awhile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 01:51:12 PM AEST
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Very sweet and full of sentiment and rich feelings.
Its sad and roamntic...longing.

Well done!!


Re: Stay With Me Awhile (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldtsweetie33 on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:19:51 PM AEST
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aww thats so sweet, but at the same time its sad. great write




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