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Array ( [sid] => 89736 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Last Night Unwanted [time] => 2005-04-03 08:44:13 [hometext] => couldnt decide which topic was right for this really, comments will be very much appreciated [bodytext] => The reflection of our souls in the streams of tears
blind out the memoires we've held onto for so long,
dont let this dagger twist through your heart today
the thought of him will undoubtably kill.

His bitter sweet smile haunts the pages of your story,
laughing at every move your dare to make.
Everyone knows your deepest secrets now,
you will never be able leave this tale behind.

You can only run, run as quick as you can,
but your getting no-where now,
as he pulls you back with the strings to your heart,
the hurt is too much for one person to take.

Dry blood stains the wrists of so many tonight
and unknown they will die, unwanted and alone,
but who would care for someone they don't know,
who would care for someone like me.

+ nail-to-the-head +
03.04.05 [comments] => 1 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 61 [informant] => nail-to-the-head [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Last Night Unwanted

Contributed by nail-to-the-head on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:44:13 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

The reflection of our souls in the streams of tears
blind out the memoires we've held onto for so long,
dont let this dagger twist through your heart today
the thought of him will undoubtably kill.

His bitter sweet smile haunts the pages of your story,
laughing at every move your dare to make.
Everyone knows your deepest secrets now,
you will never be able leave this tale behind.

You can only run, run as quick as you can,
but your getting no-where now,
as he pulls you back with the strings to your heart,
the hurt is too much for one person to take.

Dry blood stains the wrists of so many tonight
and unknown they will die, unwanted and alone,
but who would care for someone they don't know,
who would care for someone like me.

+ nail-to-the-head +
03.04.05

Copyright © nail-to-the-head ... [ 2005-04-03 08:44:13]
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Re: Last Night Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 10:05:45 AM AEST
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"His bitter sweet smile haunts the pages of your story,
laughing at every move your dare to make.
Everyone knows your deepest secrets now,
you will never be able leave this tale behind."

I really love that stanza.

I like this, it's unusual, I never expected it from the title.

Great write,
Phil

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