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I thought about you
About all of the things
We've been through

A thought entered my mind
I still wan't to be your friend
Even if you hate me
I wanna be with you till the end

You think I'm stupid
A little kid
You were Pandora's Box
And I opened the lid..

I ran to your house
Drenched to the bone
Rain was pouring
I should have phoned

But remember I was foolish
Extreme and desperate
I still loved you
Didn't want to leave it too late

You weren't home
You had already gone
I had to find you
Before the moon shone

Trying to find you
So stupid I cried
To find you dead
Was my emotional suicide...

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Suicide Worse Than Death

Contributed by Dying_Angel on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 09:02:14 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

As I lay there
I thought about you
About all of the things
We've been through

A thought entered my mind
I still wan't to be your friend
Even if you hate me
I wanna be with you till the end

You think I'm stupid
A little kid
You were Pandora's Box
And I opened the lid..

I ran to your house
Drenched to the bone
Rain was pouring
I should have phoned

But remember I was foolish
Extreme and desperate
I still loved you
Didn't want to leave it too late

You weren't home
You had already gone
I had to find you
Before the moon shone

Trying to find you
So stupid I cried
To find you dead
Was my emotional suicide...

Copyright © Dying_Angel ... [ 2005-04-03 09:02:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suicide Worse Than Death (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 09:03:11 AM AEST
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deep and well expressed,
pix xx

Re: Suicide Worse Than Death (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 09:53:18 AM AEST
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Awww, this is so sad...

I love this part though:

You were Pandora's Box
And I opened the lid..

Those two lines just called to me.

Great write,
Phil

Re: Suicide Worse Than Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 10:53:25 PM AEST
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thats so sad, but a wonderful write, it gave me the chills, but i loved it

-Kevin

Re: Suicide Worse Than Death (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 04:25:22 AM AEST
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Very well said. Spine-chilling. Great job.

~Alucia~

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