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Array ( [sid] => 89867 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Broken Cycle [time] => 2005-04-04 16:53:17 [hometext] => MAN,I'VE HAD TO OVERCOME ALOT OF DEMONS TO UNCOVER MY SOUL,I HAD TO BREAK THE CYCLES OF THE STREETS.PLEASE COMMENT AFTERWORDS [bodytext] => Heartless is what they called me as a kid,then I grew to be a man,and then forced to do a three year bid.
I've seen old friends and different faces,hell,I've even been to war with all kinds of races.
Sometimes it was like my family didn't share my blood,cause when push came to shove,they flushed like a flood.
I even lost my main homie,who chose to disown me,but in my heart is where he'll be,may God grant him wings and let his angel free.
Forgive me father,I know I have alot of sins,but thats why I gave my life to you,I was tired of losing,I wanted to win.
Finally I was released from the pen,only to begin a new hope for life,a grown faith now grows from within.
I have nomore friends and I took care of the rest of my foes,so as of today,I walk the streets on my own.
The love I seek is impossible to find,so instead of searching,I occupy my time by foretifing the knowledge that flows through my mind..
In my soul hides my pain,but I won't let it get to me,never will I let it control my brain,besides, the world is mine,and I still have everthing to gain. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 21 [informant] => THUGGIN4REAL [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
The Broken Cycle

Contributed by THUGGIN4REAL on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 04:53:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Heartless is what they called me as a kid,then I grew to be a man,and then forced to do a three year bid.
I've seen old friends and different faces,hell,I've even been to war with all kinds of races.
Sometimes it was like my family didn't share my blood,cause when push came to shove,they flushed like a flood.
I even lost my main homie,who chose to disown me,but in my heart is where he'll be,may God grant him wings and let his angel free.
Forgive me father,I know I have alot of sins,but thats why I gave my life to you,I was tired of losing,I wanted to win.
Finally I was released from the pen,only to begin a new hope for life,a grown faith now grows from within.
I have nomore friends and I took care of the rest of my foes,so as of today,I walk the streets on my own.
The love I seek is impossible to find,so instead of searching,I occupy my time by foretifing the knowledge that flows through my mind..
In my soul hides my pain,but I won't let it get to me,never will I let it control my brain,besides, the world is mine,and I still have everthing to gain.




Copyright © THUGGIN4REAL ... [ 2005-04-04 16:53:17]
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Re: The Broken Cycle (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:43:28 PM AEST
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This poem shows what a lot of us are going through on some level... I'm sorry that you have to hide your pain...

I'm here if you ever need someone to talk to

Great write by the way

Love ya,
~Kiela~


Re: The Broken Cycle (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:53:42 PM AEST
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very descriptive, nicely done


Re: The Broken Cycle (User Rating: 1 )
by b_rand on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 06:09:42 PM AEST
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You have a lot of talent with a great story to tell. Just some words of advice, the caps lock in the subject line really makes you appear unintelligent. It would be a lot more appealing to read if you wrote it correctly.


Re: The Broken Cycle (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:43:24 PM AEST
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You are showing a soft side that I bet no one in the real world knows. I always like reading your poems and prose... Tiffany J.




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