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Array ( [sid] => 89873 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where Are You? [time] => 2005-04-04 17:32:59 [hometext] => My big brother's no where to be found, no one, including his friends know where he is, so Justin if you're out there, this one's for you [bodytext] => Your family is supposed to be there
But no one can find you
When you left behind bad memories
Did you forget about us too?
When you moved away from home
You gave us no number to call
Promising that you'd call us
But you haven't called at all
You haven't called your friends,
Nor your family,
But the thing that scares most of all
You didn't even call me
The sister that's been there through it all
Never, ever made you mad
Changed your mood around
Cried if you were sad
I did it all, I really cared
And I thought you did too
But darling brother just one question,
I miss you, where are you? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Where Are You?

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:32:59 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Your family is supposed to be there
But no one can find you
When you left behind bad memories
Did you forget about us too?
When you moved away from home
You gave us no number to call
Promising that you'd call us
But you haven't called at all
You haven't called your friends,
Nor your family,
But the thing that scares most of all
You didn't even call me
The sister that's been there through it all
Never, ever made you mad
Changed your mood around
Cried if you were sad
I did it all, I really cared
And I thought you did too
But darling brother just one question,
I miss you, where are you?

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-04-04 17:32:59]
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Re: Where Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:51:07 PM AEST
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This is nice. It all feels very genuine. I hope he contacts you soon. (^_^)v

Re: Where Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:57:17 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem. The longing you must feel. This is a reminder to me to call my family more often. Thanks

Re: Where Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by b_rand on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 06:07:17 PM AEST
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Great job with this poem, it really brings out emotion. Good luck with contacting him.

Re: Where Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:48:29 PM AEST
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aww i hope he calls .
nice write.

Re: Where Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:06:36 AM AEST
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hope you hear from him soon, that was a real poem, feelings felt all the way through
pix xx

Re: Where Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 05:59:49 PM AEST
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Oh sweetie..
This is so sad, and so sweet, and so you.
I hope your brother reads this and feels bad for putting you through it.

I hope he gets in touch soon, hun.

I really like this Kiela, I can feel it. I really can.

Great write my friend.
Phil xxx

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