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Ghost of Love
Contributed by
freckle
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:04:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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That fateful day I met you
Is still fresh upon my mind
It is embedded in my heart
For ever and all time
When I go places I've been with you
Our ghosts about me speak
They talk and laugh and show me
That I am very weak
It's silly for me to think
That you can hear them too
For you are stronger so they
Can not reach out and grab at you
It's strange to think that what we had
Was so special and yet so brief
For even though it's been years now,
Your memory brings me grief
I will not shed more tears for you
My heart, it has run dry
But even though, you love me not
I'll never say good-bye.
Carol L.Chadwick
July 28,1981
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freckle
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2005-04-04 22:04:31]
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Re: Ghost of Love
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by FearMyRawr on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:06:41 PM AEST
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| I like the last part the most, it's really good. |
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Re: Ghost of Love
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by DesolantDreamer on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:24:47 PM AEST
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This is a sad poem and grief is written in every line. It made me cry because I lost someone I loved and it reminded me of how I felt. This is very good and nicely written. I wish you happiness and joy.
Stay strong,
Tsubaki |
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Re: Ghost of Love
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by papalegba on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 09:25:41 AM AEST
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some times the ghosts of love are frightening and the never seem to go on even when you have a new love the ghosts of the past seem to linger it is a sad game that God gives us
but keep well
love the papa |
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