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You struck a pose as a victor
In a corner, I stood waiting
With a gift that I was saving

Then I took you by the arm
I protected you from all harm
Except one dear, except one dear
I consumed you in just one fear

Some friend you are
You left me with scars
It's the truth, it's the truth, it's the truth
You broke my heart

Natomi
The only
Sweet Natomi

And I led you to a dark place
All my fingers caressed your face
And I told you how I loved you
But you hurt me and were untrue

It's so sudden how you shined
When my light came from behind
And I bled you, such a red rose
And I dressed you as a ghost

Some friend you were
Do you still stir?
It's a blur, it's a blur, it's a blur
I'm so unsure

Natomi
The only
Sweet Natomi
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Sweet Natomi

Contributed by TheForgottenMelody on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:09:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

In the confines of a picture
You struck a pose as a victor
In a corner, I stood waiting
With a gift that I was saving

Then I took you by the arm
I protected you from all harm
Except one dear, except one dear
I consumed you in just one fear

Some friend you are
You left me with scars
It's the truth, it's the truth, it's the truth
You broke my heart

Natomi
The only
Sweet Natomi

And I led you to a dark place
All my fingers caressed your face
And I told you how I loved you
But you hurt me and were untrue

It's so sudden how you shined
When my light came from behind
And I bled you, such a red rose
And I dressed you as a ghost

Some friend you were
Do you still stir?
It's a blur, it's a blur, it's a blur
I'm so unsure

Natomi
The only
Sweet Natomi

Copyright © TheForgottenMelody ... [ 2005-04-05 22:09:10]
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Re: Sweet Natomi (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 01:22:44 AM AEST
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a sad, emotional and deep write. Hang tuff friend. This was a sad, but very well written piece of poetry. A great poem. Well done
Hugs,
Sue

Re: Sweet Natomi (User Rating: 1 )
by vox on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:44:38 PM AEST
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it is a sad lil' poem but beautiful indeed. touching. keep the good work friend...ill be looking 4ward ...

Re: Sweet Natomi (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:00:17 AM AEST
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POwerful and beautiful. Great write

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