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Array ( [sid] => 90084 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A forsaken love..... [time] => 2005-04-06 08:29:55 [hometext] => Amidst the sky and clouds my thoughts of you dwell [bodytext] => The winds blow gently
Weaving calm into my mind
Casting a soft impression
A painted love you'll be sure to find
Subtleness drifting amidst the
springtime sky
Amongst the soft white clouds
Floating way up high
It takes my heart on a journey
Its destination unknown
Calm and serenity
Peaceful emotions placidly shown
I see your face imprinted
Embedded into the soft white clouds
I'm forever happy up here
Thinking of you I'm allowed
Noone to refrain me
From thinking of you
All those jealous souls
Condemn our love's what they do
Here we are so happy
We have our place amongst the
sky and stars
An eternity of elation
Which nobody can spoil or mar
As the wind softly arouses the hair
on my skin
I am once again awakened
A bleak and sheer reminder
In reality our love is so forsaken... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 2 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A forsaken love.....

Contributed by mina-1 on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:29:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The winds blow gently
Weaving calm into my mind
Casting a soft impression
A painted love you'll be sure to find
Subtleness drifting amidst the
springtime sky
Amongst the soft white clouds
Floating way up high
It takes my heart on a journey
Its destination unknown
Calm and serenity
Peaceful emotions placidly shown
I see your face imprinted
Embedded into the soft white clouds
I'm forever happy up here
Thinking of you I'm allowed
Noone to refrain me
From thinking of you
All those jealous souls
Condemn our love's what they do
Here we are so happy
We have our place amongst the
sky and stars
An eternity of elation
Which nobody can spoil or mar
As the wind softly arouses the hair
on my skin
I am once again awakened
A bleak and sheer reminder
In reality our love is so forsaken...




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Re: A forsaken love..... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:44:19 AM AEST
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So beautiful sue love amidst the clouds and

angels lovely poetry . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: A forsaken love..... (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:01:07 AM AEST
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So peaceful...I just want to go there....
beautiful,...
...as the wind softly arouses the hair on my skin...ahh .yes beautiful
5 stars!~


Re: A forsaken love..... (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:40:25 PM AEST
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yeah,i was feeling your poem,nicely put together.


Re: A forsaken love..... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:56:15 AM AEST
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Good work.
huggs,
emy


Re: A forsaken love..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 07:23:05 AM AEST
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I was floating with you and your imagery was spellbinding.

You just keep getting better.

Send a lil inspiration my WAY!

Loved your poem.

Kie


Re: A forsaken love..... (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:48:34 PM AEST
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VERY EXPRESSING WITH A LOVELY SCENT OF LOVE! YOUR BEAUTY SURROUNDS YOUR POETRY LIKE THAT OF A GOLD LINING AROUND THE OUTSKIRTS OF DIMONDS!! YOUR WORKS ARE AN INSPIRATION TO ALL,WHO DO COME & SOMETIMES FALL!!! YOU MAKE DREAMS SEEM AS IF THEY HAVE WINGS,& EXPRESS ALL THE GREAT THINGS THEY MIGHT BRING!!!! VERY NICELY WRITTEN WITH ALOT OF MEANING SUE!!!!!

Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!!




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