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Array ( [sid] => 90111 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drowning [time] => 2005-04-06 12:38:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Drowning in my sorrow
Hidden in my solitude
I wonder if I'll make it through tomorrow.
Lonliness is creeping through me,
Bright days have now turned grey
And I wonder if you can see.

Death is not just a word, but a friend
A dark shadow in your heart,
A door way to the end.
End the agony that I breathe.
I'm diseased within my soul
By the thoughts that you leave.

Bloody wounds will leak tonight,
Provoked by the events of the night.
Disregard your troubles, accept the pain
The path of dispair is imprinted on our brain.

Awaken by our nightmares night after night,
The demon within makes it hard to fight.
Possessed by this image,
I lay there sweating on my bed
Thinking about everything he said.

Neck deep in this ocean I call misery,
I slowly sink to the ground,
Dispair chokes as I drown.

Kate Ecklund [comments] => 2 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 13 [informant] => suicidal_imbecile [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Drowning

Contributed by suicidal_imbecile on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:38:28 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Drowning in my sorrow
Hidden in my solitude
I wonder if I'll make it through tomorrow.
Lonliness is creeping through me,
Bright days have now turned grey
And I wonder if you can see.

Death is not just a word, but a friend
A dark shadow in your heart,
A door way to the end.
End the agony that I breathe.
I'm diseased within my soul
By the thoughts that you leave.

Bloody wounds will leak tonight,
Provoked by the events of the night.
Disregard your troubles, accept the pain
The path of dispair is imprinted on our brain.

Awaken by our nightmares night after night,
The demon within makes it hard to fight.
Possessed by this image,
I lay there sweating on my bed
Thinking about everything he said.

Neck deep in this ocean I call misery,
I slowly sink to the ground,
Dispair chokes as I drown.

Kate Ecklund

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Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 09:16:02 AM AEST
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wow.. very dark and full of haunting imagery. I'm glad i read this one, and thanks for sharing.

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:16:34 AM AEST
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Girl this write is awesome….really dark but really powerful. Thank you for sharing your heart and soul in this write. I feel a lot of what you write here in my own life. Life is hard and I’m glad I read this. Take care and keep your head up girl…..Steve

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