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[aid] => mick
[title] => cursed
[time] => 2005-04-06 21:48:55
[hometext] => revised version, original was three pages long... i would greatly appreciate if you read and commented on this... and i need title suggestions please help me out!
[bodytext] => All that was holding onto me Suddenly let go The ocean waves wash away Everything I know And I feel that inside I知 dying way too slow The pain eats at my flesh From the inside out The pulsing deep inside my head I want to scream and shout I know I have nothing left And here I stand in doubt But I cut till I bleed And I love till it hurts I hope it値l get better Yet know it値l get worse And there is no way out of it This deadly, poisonous curse Let you send me an angel To help me rest in peace Let me finally close my eyes And drift off into sleep Maybe she could take my hand And my maker I would meet Unsuspected death It fools us every time And with each life taken away Soon it will be mine But I promise you, not yet For now I wait in line All these things I speak Are painful to even say These memories I ponder Haunt me everyday And no matter how hard I try The consequences don稚 go away I hold my head in my hands With warm tears running down All the emotion knotted up inside I have to let it out And I will never escape This misery I have found Darkness surrounds me The black covers my eyes I want to scream out in vain Yet it痴 pointless to even try And nothing is clear to me I have to wonder why Bottled up inside of me Is a story too long to tell And I know I cannot hide it You know me all too well I知 sorry I was so insecure I知 sorry I finally fell So I say good-bye to this life And begin yet another I can only hope this time My heart doth not smother And I plead that I myself I do not have to cover [comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 48 [informant] => blue_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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