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Array ( [sid] => 90365 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Perfect Moment [time] => 2005-04-08 20:16:07 [hometext] => Do dreams really come true? *I love you* [bodytext] => They held hands as they walked,
neither speaking a word,
taking in the perfect moment,
And then they stopped
and turned.

She looked deep into his eyes
and told him dreams come true.
He smiled as he looked back into hers,
and kissed her,
right after he said I know they do.

She kissed him back
and hoped it wouldn't end,
but when they finally pulled away,
at that moment then,
he saw it in her eyes,
the same she saw in his,
and they kissed again. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 486 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Mesano [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

The Perfect Moment

Contributed by Mesano on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:16:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

They held hands as they walked,
neither speaking a word,
taking in the perfect moment,
And then they stopped
and turned.

She looked deep into his eyes
and told him dreams come true.
He smiled as he looked back into hers,
and kissed her,
right after he said I know they do.

She kissed him back
and hoped it wouldn't end,
but when they finally pulled away,
at that moment then,
he saw it in her eyes,
the same she saw in his,
and they kissed again.

Copyright © Mesano ... [ 2005-04-08 20:16:07]
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Re: The Perfect Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:29:47 PM AEST
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I LOVE THIS POEM!! its so touching and sweet this is something i wish would happen!

Re: The Perfect Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Phantomdream on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:49:58 PM AEST
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Pretty pretty pretty! I love it I love it I love it!!!!!! What more can I say? Ooohhh shiny....oops, sorry.....

Re: The Perfect Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 07:23:32 AM AEST
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Man, My heart's a'flutter, and it isn't tachychardia. Such a simple but powerful feeling, and well written.

Spike

Re: The Perfect Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:05:54 PM AEST
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Awwww..this is really very sweet. I love it.... You have captured the moment perfectly...

Jenni

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