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Array ( [sid] => 9038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Gone [time] => 2002-12-22 00:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I try to hide
Running from my life
Inside my mind

Memories that choose to stay
Too much at stake
What have I made?

I just wanted to scream
But no one was there
To listen to my pain
So I buried the anguish
Inside of me
And now it's back
Crawling inside
Wanting to be free

So who were they?
That did this to me
Who made me insane

I trusted them
More than anyone else
But they didn't stay for me

And now I feel more naked than before
The pain inside is taking over me
A cool breeze inside my mind
Like someone has opened my door
I feel more empty now
Things I thought were mine to keep
Gone [comments] => 5 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 13 [informant] => AngryBunny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Gone

Contributed by AngryBunny on Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I try to hide
Running from my life
Inside my mind

Memories that choose to stay
Too much at stake
What have I made?

I just wanted to scream
But no one was there
To listen to my pain
So I buried the anguish
Inside of me
And now it's back
Crawling inside
Wanting to be free

So who were they?
That did this to me
Who made me insane

I trusted them
More than anyone else
But they didn't stay for me

And now I feel more naked than before
The pain inside is taking over me
A cool breeze inside my mind
Like someone has opened my door
I feel more empty now
Things I thought were mine to keep
Gone

Copyright © AngryBunny ... [ 2002-12-22 00:20:00]
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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:29:12 AM AEST
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Hi Bunny,
Very good write altho sad. I can relate to these feelings.
Hang tough! You can make it thru.
PEACE, LUV, JOY, HEALING,
emy

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:29:18 AM AEST
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Hi Bunny,
Very good write altho sad. I can relate to these feelings.
Hang tough! You can make it thru.
PEACE, LUV, JOY, HEALING,
emy

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:29:22 AM AEST
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Hi Bunny,
Very good write altho sad. I can relate to these feelings.
Hang tough! You can make it thru.
PEACE, LUV, JOY, HEALING,
emy

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 02:42:22 PM AEST
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This is a very sad poem....Things i thought were mine to keep ....Gone....that's a very strong line and message in this poem....thanks for sharing it i hope your pain lifts from you...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:45:44 PM AEST
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touching and warming upon a soul that knows the feeling only too well at times..

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