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I liked you
and knew one day me and you would be together
I always would be standing by you
and you wouldnt even notice me
I would try so hard for you to notice me
but nothing...
But 2 years later
I still like you
and you said you like me long
and asked me out
I said yes without a care
and now Im so deeply in love
I feel like were meant to be together
I feel like were gonna be together for life
I love you so much
I would do anything for you
But
Your moving away now
what am I supposed to do
I dont want you to go
The first guy I actually love
the perfect guy
is this goodbye?
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Goodbye?

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 02:15:16 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

When I first met you
I liked you
and knew one day me and you would be together
I always would be standing by you
and you wouldnt even notice me
I would try so hard for you to notice me
but nothing...
But 2 years later
I still like you
and you said you like me long
and asked me out
I said yes without a care
and now Im so deeply in love
I feel like were meant to be together
I feel like were gonna be together for life
I love you so much
I would do anything for you
But
Your moving away now
what am I supposed to do
I dont want you to go
The first guy I actually love
the perfect guy
is this goodbye?

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-04-09 02:15:16]
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Re: Goodbye? (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 08:49:03 AM AEST
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He may be the first but he won't be the last

love has a way of finding u when u least

exspect it, u have time on your side a very

precious comodity beautifly done **********

Dorian Chambers

Re: Goodbye? (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:31:03 AM AEST
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A sad, heart breaking write. You know if u r meant to be together things will sort themselves out. I wish u all the best and I totally agree with Ben on this one.
A sad, but great write.
Hugs,
Sue

Re: Goodbye? (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 02:45:45 PM AEST
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i know what you are going through. i left town and left this amazing boy kirk. i love him and he is my everything. just because hes moving doesnt mean you wont see each other any more.

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