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My heart emerges and begins to float
Amidst the star studded sky
Riding on a robust clouded boat

Up into the shiny starry night
Where dreams are cast in prayer
I hear every single whispered one
As I get closer to heaven's golden layer

One heartfelt prayer
That I couldn't help but over hear
Was that of your anguished prayer
Asking God to hold you near

So I take this heartfelt prayer
That's wrapped with pain and tears
I help guide it to make its way to heaven
Because to me you are so dear

My heart slowly descends the starry night sky
Back into my body as I sleep safe and sound
But before my heart headed towards Earth's shores
I made sure your prayer was found and it knocked on
heaven's doors...
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Your unheard prayer...

Contributed by mina-1 on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 10:03:12 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

As I lay snuggled deeply asleep
My heart emerges and begins to float
Amidst the star studded sky
Riding on a robust clouded boat

Up into the shiny starry night
Where dreams are cast in prayer
I hear every single whispered one
As I get closer to heaven's golden layer

One heartfelt prayer
That I couldn't help but over hear
Was that of your anguished prayer
Asking God to hold you near

So I take this heartfelt prayer
That's wrapped with pain and tears
I help guide it to make its way to heaven
Because to me you are so dear

My heart slowly descends the starry night sky
Back into my body as I sleep safe and sound
But before my heart headed towards Earth's shores
I made sure your prayer was found and it knocked on
heaven's doors...

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-04-09 10:03:12]
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Re: Your unheard prayer... (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 10:55:03 AM AEST
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This poem literally took my breath away. The only thing I can say is it was beautiful, everything flowed beautifully, excellent choice of words, and keep writing!

Re: Your unheard prayer... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 12:57:32 PM AEST
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This hit me in the heart.

It just moved me so deeply and so powerfully that I fought tears.

It is your absolute best. My favorite.

Kie

Re: Your unheard prayer... (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 01:12:56 AM AEST
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AMAZING! LIKE AN OUTTER EXPERIENCE,
BUT FROM THE INNER PROPERTIES OF YOUR GREAT HEART!! YOUR DREAMS SAIL FROM HEAVEN TO EARTH & BACK AGAIN,
ALL FOR THE PLEASURE OF DELIVERING THE PRAYER OF A FRIEND!!! nuff said!!!!
P.S.-I LOVED IT!!!!!

Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!!

Re: Your unheard prayer... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:14:21 PM AEST
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a poem worth being proud of sue, but surely you knew this already. excellent ending. i love endings that are so good they are worth the read even in themselves.

Re: Your unheard prayer... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 03:30:09 AM AEST
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Wow Sue this is a heavenly masterpeice. So beautifull, touching and very deep with the luv of a child of God behind it.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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