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Hurting
Contributed by
ashleigh4
on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My hands shake. i
Cut deeper and deeper into
my creamy white skin
soon turns red and raw.
It throbs, and pains
but i keep cutting.
Deeper and deeper
Into my skin, into my soul.
Raised welts. The badge
of a masachist.
Blood drips from my arm
to the creamy white sheet.
Like my arm, a blank canvas,
stained by my blood.
My depression.
Violated and alone.
Aching
Copyright ©
ashleigh4
... [
2002-12-22 07:00:00]
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Re: Hurting
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by the_temptation_of_suicide on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 10:53:54 AM AEST
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| hi. your poems are really good, when i read the it is asthough i am reading a poem i have written because your poems describe exactally how i feel. keep the writting up n if u want to talk, i'm willing to listen.xx |
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Re: Hurting
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 06:48:12 PM AEST
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This is so sad Ashleigh I can relate to this a lot. I thought a masochist was someone who hurt kids, but my mom said someone that likes to feel pain. I like to feel pain sometimes as well it makes me feel all calm, but Ashleigh cutting is NOT the answer. I hope poems like this is a release for you. I love the lines stained by my blood and depression... wow this is good.
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Re: Hurting
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 04:37:27 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is so good... |
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Re: Hurting
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by Blue on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 01:26:57 PM AEST
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most of my poetry is about suicide....i can definitely relate...it makes you feel so much better when you're making marks in your flesh
beautiful poem....
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