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SultryRose's Signatures

You don't wonna hear my past.
You gotta be determined to last.
It's an evil world down here
but grab luv, don't fear.

So many die at their own hand.
Self defeating nature plagues our land.
It breaks my heart to see
Many dieing searching for free.

Keep on keeping on to help.
Put your own troubles on a shelf.
Reach out to our children in pain.
Teach them luv in lifes rain.

Where are their answers, I cry?
They live in pain, oh my!
Give us the key that turns
Their tormented souls that burn.

Show them precious is life.
Help them overcome their strife.
Use me Oh gentle, luving savoir
To help them see in them you favor.

Light a candle in each immortal soul.
Give them lifes luv to glow.
There's no rest if we don't try.
Oh Lord don't let them slip by.

What does it say if suicide rules?
Where's your answer to get um thru?
We as adults shuld never give up.
Let's lead them to victory's cup
in Jesus name, Amen! [comments] => 11 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 43 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

SO MANY

Contributed by emystar on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 02:32:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

SultryRose's Signatures

You don't wonna hear my past.
You gotta be determined to last.
It's an evil world down here
but grab luv, don't fear.

So many die at their own hand.
Self defeating nature plagues our land.
It breaks my heart to see
Many dieing searching for free.

Keep on keeping on to help.
Put your own troubles on a shelf.
Reach out to our children in pain.
Teach them luv in lifes rain.

Where are their answers, I cry?
They live in pain, oh my!
Give us the key that turns
Their tormented souls that burn.

Show them precious is life.
Help them overcome their strife.
Use me Oh gentle, luving savoir
To help them see in them you favor.

Light a candle in each immortal soul.
Give them lifes luv to glow.
There's no rest if we don't try.
Oh Lord don't let them slip by.

What does it say if suicide rules?
Where's your answer to get um thru?
We as adults shuld never give up.
Let's lead them to victory's cup
in Jesus name, Amen!

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-04-11 02:32:41]
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Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 03:09:48 AM AEST
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Another prayer from you Emy. Yes there are so many. One would like to help but how. Keep smilin hugs from bernard.

Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 03:26:00 AM AEST
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Emy this was such a well done poem
Hope all is well with you and you're family.

Jane

Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 03:27:59 AM AEST
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Wow..this is splendid..really a heart touching message..soo good..Good hearted Lady..
hugs n Love my friend .. venkat

Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:20:31 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem well stated and written . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:06:43 AM AEST
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Emystar, - true twinkling star, - this is sooooooooo beautiful soooo touching!
Yes tragic it is how many get lost, because so many do not care.
This beautiful and heart wrenching poem is a clarion call to stir the hearts of the indolent..
Thank you thank you for composing and posting it.
Love and peace
Elizabeth

Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by Arsenic on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 05:13:10 PM AEST
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Very nice poem. You pick such a tough and emotional topic...sometimes it seems we promote the easy way out, if it can be considered that, in our culture of death. sigh. Thanks for sharing, and warm regards,

Michael Helvey
ARSENIC

Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:08:57 PM AEST
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Emy, you're such a talented poetess whose words shine radiantly from her work. This is an outstanding piece of poetry so beautifully written and expressed. Thanks for posting this wonderful poem. Another superb poem to add to all ur other great pieces. well done my friend.
Hugs,
~Sue~

Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 03:59:45 AM AEST
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Post like these have establised you as one of the highlights of this site, Emy.

I am always impressed by what you say and how you present.

Nazzy ~

Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:02:43 PM AEST
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very nice emy. if only people would read and take the message from it.

Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:13:49 AM AEST
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This is really a beautiful poem and really positive. It gives a lot of hope. Thank you for posting this.

Scott

Re: SO MANY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:50:15 AM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL!

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