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I can’t handle this endless pain within my heart.
You led me on to something that was never true,
It crushed my heart and now we are through.
I changed my entire way of life for your own benefit,
I became someone I wasn’t and got nothing out of it.
Now I see your true colors,
And I have noticed you are no different from the others.
Somehow I have to subside with this pain,
Every time I see you a little of me goes insane.
I don’t know what to say or do,
But it is so damn hard to forget about you.
The more I try the worse I get,
Getting to know you is actually the one thing I regret.

Written by: Justin ford
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 342 [topic] => 32 [informant] => bigj [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
thoughts of you

Contributed by bigj on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:24:37 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Immaturity Is what caused us to split apart,
I can’t handle this endless pain within my heart.
You led me on to something that was never true,
It crushed my heart and now we are through.
I changed my entire way of life for your own benefit,
I became someone I wasn’t and got nothing out of it.
Now I see your true colors,
And I have noticed you are no different from the others.
Somehow I have to subside with this pain,
Every time I see you a little of me goes insane.
I don’t know what to say or do,
But it is so damn hard to forget about you.
The more I try the worse I get,
Getting to know you is actually the one thing I regret.

Written by: Justin ford




Copyright © bigj ... [ 2005-04-11 19:24:37]
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Re: thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:30:00 PM AEST
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very brilliantly done. your first posts certainly put mine to shame. im glad i discovered your poetry, im lacking in reading good poetry these days. welcome to the site by the way. =]


Re: thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:43:15 PM AEST
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Another great write justin...I am seeing great talent here...and really Im glad to...this was great...now on to your third piece...

Clark


Re: thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Noelia on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:57:53 AM AEST
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I like ur poem, its good. Ur a good writer.




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