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When fire fills the sky,
When the sun erupts in ecstasy
And fading furies die.
I want to fill your life with love,
So full you want to cry,
And make myself your land and sea,
Your mirror and your eye.

I lay my happiness upon
The pillow of your sigh;
Your joy, your love, your need of me
Is where my angels lie.
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I Promise You My Innocence

Contributed by concrete_rose on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 10:52:01 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I promise you my innocence
When fire fills the sky,
When the sun erupts in ecstasy
And fading furies die.
I want to fill your life with love,
So full you want to cry,
And make myself your land and sea,
Your mirror and your eye.

I lay my happiness upon
The pillow of your sigh;
Your joy, your love, your need of me
Is where my angels lie.

Copyright © concrete_rose ... [ 2005-04-13 10:52:01]
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Re: I Promise You My Innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 11:10:27 AM AEST
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This was really beautiful; I love its simplicity and sincerity.

Great job of writing a wonderful poem.

Jane

Re: I Promise You My Innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 05:51:50 PM AEST
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This is a beautifully wriiten poem. It's so sweet and so heart warming. An outstanding piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing it.
Hugs,
~Sue~

Re: I Promise You My Innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by gurlthatwontgiveup on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 01:12:36 AM AEST
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I thought this poem was beautiful and very well written.

Re: I Promise You My Innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 02:12:00 PM AEST
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I really like your poetry, it flows so easily. I'm jealous. No, seriously though, great poety, awesome rhythm.
Take care.
David

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