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Array ( [sid] => 90818 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Throne of Tears [time] => 2005-04-13 11:56:24 [hometext] => What we are is probably the sumtotal of all our actions, it has nothing to do I fear with our hopes and inspirations. But all in all the master equation is the overriding fate that consigns or condemn us to each our own privations. I am I fear... [bodytext] => As I sit upon this throne
across this great divide,
upon this frozen ocean
dead dreams, emotional discards.

I see not the distant shore
long lost are hope's embrace,
for the darkness seeps more and more
as the light is slowly displaced.

Gone are the summer's warmth
in this bleak and frozen landscape,
the cold and frigid storms
from which there is no escape.

Oh how I reach up for the sun
but gloomy clouds get in the way,
deep within this lonely clime
as penance perhaps I have to stay. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The Throne of Tears

Contributed by Baronhawk on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 11:56:24 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



As I sit upon this throne
across this great divide,
upon this frozen ocean
dead dreams, emotional discards.

I see not the distant shore
long lost are hope's embrace,
for the darkness seeps more and more
as the light is slowly displaced.

Gone are the summer's warmth
in this bleak and frozen landscape,
the cold and frigid storms
from which there is no escape.

Oh how I reach up for the sun
but gloomy clouds get in the way,
deep within this lonely clime
as penance perhaps I have to stay.




Copyright © Baronhawk ... [ 2005-04-13 11:56:24]
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Re: The Throne of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by enamat on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:36:52 PM AEST
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gloomy and dark, but i can completely reliate. like your vivid nature description and how you use it to explain yourself.


Re: The Throne of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 01:19:40 PM AEST
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I love the way you used nature to describe feelings I understand this very well a flowing work of art as always my friend
Michelle


Re: The Throne of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:09:57 PM AEST
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Yes indeed it is a flowig work of art - but reading it one feels pushed to to get up to help dispel the gloominess pervading this extraordinarily beautiful poem. Dispel the darkness friend and let the sun of hope shine!
Elizabeth


Re: The Throne of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 02:50:45 AM AEST
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A lucid write, rich in imagery and texture.
Excellent flow and rhyme as well as content and significance.
A beautiful yet sombre piece.
It feels rather metaphorical, especially with the aid of the explanation before the poem/




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