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Array ( [sid] => 90853 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Through My Eyes [time] => 2005-04-13 17:04:12 [hometext] => Looking at things from another angle..... [bodytext] => I can see the world if i want to
Open up my eyes is all i have to do
So much can be explained through some ones eyes
You can tell if it truthfull and you can tell if it's lies

Just windows to a soul is how they may look
But the way i see can't be explained in a book
They are windows into my magnificant mind
So much can be seen even by the blind

What do the blind see when they open their eyes
They might see more than we do it's the fact that they try
What do their tears feel like when they fall down their face
Asking them just isn't enough i would have to be put in their place

When i close my eyes and rest a while
My mind rewinds everything and puts it into a file
But some things that i see i don't get it right away
That's when i take another look at it in a different way

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Through My Eyes

Contributed by Kay-Kay on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 05:04:12 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I can see the world if i want to
Open up my eyes is all i have to do
So much can be explained through some ones eyes
You can tell if it truthfull and you can tell if it's lies

Just windows to a soul is how they may look
But the way i see can't be explained in a book
They are windows into my magnificant mind
So much can be seen even by the blind

What do the blind see when they open their eyes
They might see more than we do it's the fact that they try
What do their tears feel like when they fall down their face
Asking them just isn't enough i would have to be put in their place

When i close my eyes and rest a while
My mind rewinds everything and puts it into a file
But some things that i see i don't get it right away
That's when i take another look at it in a different way

Copyright © Kay-Kay ... [ 2005-04-13 17:04:12]
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Re: Through My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:42:35 PM AEST
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Wow this is one of those poems that really make you think, and try to piucture yourself in someone else's shoes. You are a great writer. Good work. :-)

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