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If You Come Back To Me
Contributed by
tollo
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Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I look out my window
and I watch everything crumble,
right before my eyes
I started saying my good-byes,
because I know that without you
my life is nothing,
and without you
theres absolutely no reason for living,
you don't know how hard it is,
you took me this far
and now you left me,
I gave you all my love
I gave you my heart
and everything else I had,
I'll do anything for you to come back,
anything,
anything,
anything,
If you come back to me
Copyright ©
tollo
... [
2002-12-22 21:20:00]
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Re: If You Come Back To Me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 12:05:56 AM AEST
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| I would have chose that for the title too,the spelling was fine,dont be so hard on yourself this was really good! Christina |
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Re: If You Come Back To Me
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by OreO on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:16:45 PM AEST
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Awww tollo surely they will give you another chance, and i hope they read this write...try to keep your chin up and smile just a little bit...it get's better after a little time passes by....my heart is right there with you...as i have been here before...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: If You Come Back To Me
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by Haligh on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 10:11:35 PM AEST
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awwww. i know how you feel. :-(
it sucks. |
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Re: If You Come Back To Me
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by emmafarah on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 02:36:21 AM AEST
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| why am i the only one who doesn't understand... well i guess its kinda hard to comprehend the works of someone u know so well... well good work tollo, now next time i see u, explain... |
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Re: If You Come Back To Me
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by EndEformEtrancE on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 08:22:33 PM AEST
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this chokes me, once again with pangs of recognition. [ouch]. thanks for this beautiful poem, i hope they come back to you. But remember - if they don't then they probably didn't deserve you anyway. don't let them get you down, whatever happens!
Lots of love
PEACE |
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Re: If You Come Back To Me
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:51:24 AM AEST
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This is very good! I can feel the emotion in it. A well-worn subject, since it happens to many of us. It's a new pain for everyone, but their poetry often sounds the same. Not so here. This has a depth and vitality in it, far away from worn and shoddy romance.
Blessings to you.
Andrew
PS Nothing wrong with the spelling here. |
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