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Array ( [sid] => 91035 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my ghost [time] => 2005-04-15 04:21:48 [hometext] => for tommy my ghost that i feel all the time.. i love you please rest..... [bodytext] => I saw you today as I turned my head,
fighting back the tears i walked on
i knew it couldn't be real, because you are gone
but for a moment today you walked toward me

i remember the looking in your loving green eyes
eyes that neve once were the keeper of lies,
i thought i heard your voice on the phone
but realized it was just the dial tone

i beg you to come to me in a dream
so i'll know your okay in heaven,
hold me close as i sleep
in my heart is where i will always keep
the best love i have ever known...

but i love you enough to let you go
for your love is one thing i did know
i love you even though your gone
and i miss you here at home

love you baby
rest in peace,
its my time to feel the ease
of pain i carry from the day your life ended... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 22 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

my ghost

Contributed by brokenwings on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:21:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I saw you today as I turned my head,
fighting back the tears i walked on
i knew it couldn't be real, because you are gone
but for a moment today you walked toward me

i remember the looking in your loving green eyes
eyes that neve once were the keeper of lies,
i thought i heard your voice on the phone
but realized it was just the dial tone

i beg you to come to me in a dream
so i'll know your okay in heaven,
hold me close as i sleep
in my heart is where i will always keep
the best love i have ever known...

but i love you enough to let you go
for your love is one thing i did know
i love you even though your gone
and i miss you here at home

love you baby
rest in peace,
its my time to feel the ease
of pain i carry from the day your life ended...

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-04-15 04:21:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: my ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:29:03 AM AEST
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Such a sad write but full with luv-n-feeling. I'm sure he's your guardian angel.
I'm so sorry for your loss as it's obvious from this write that this person touched u deeply in life.
faith hope, joy, peace,
emy

Re: my ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:45:44 AM AEST
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This is such a sad and heart touching write. Condolences on ur loss. My prayers are with u friend. Tommy is ur guardian angel watching over u. A sad, but well expressed poem. Well done
Hugs,
~Sue~

Re: my ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:20:29 AM AEST
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To know that you'll never touch that person or hear them speak again is the worst pain you'll ever know. But, you have to let them go in order to survive. I'm sorry for your loss and I hope Life brings you nothing but happiness from now on. Shey

Re: my ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:33:06 PM AEST
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Beautiful peice of writting, u r the essenial

poet of the times and culture, a reflection of

of the past, rebelious yet necessary . . .

Dorian Chambers

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