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Array ( [sid] => 91102 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => why leave when you can stay? [time] => 2005-04-15 19:43:47 [hometext] => all comments are welcome, so just drop a comment and tell me wat u think [bodytext] => i wrote this because my best freind kyle killed himself this week and his mom
wanted me to say something @ the funeral and here is wat im plannin to say because
alot of the freinds of ours have been talkin bout commitin suicide since he died among others

why leave when you can stay?
*************************************

this is for all those that have wondered why life is so wrong and ungreatful to you
all those around you make it seem worse than what it really is
i understand i also have felt the same way
i'm in the same boat as all of you i am looked down
upon i am judged for every little thing i thing i try to do
i have tryed and i have failed
for those that think life would be better without you
think again

life has a cycle
if you leave
you break the cycle
that effects all those around you
more than you can ever know
if you leave this crule, painful place they call earth
then someone must go through the pain to fix the cycle
if that means one to even 100,000 people that have to go through pain
to fix the cycle on which you broke then so be it
but remember why would you want to put someone that didnt even cause you pain
through pain to fix the cycle you broke then so be it
but remember there are easier and better ways to fix the problem

hey im still here
do you think i havent thought about doing what you
may be thinking right now if you do
your dead wrong
i'll admit... I have almost succeeded at trying it
but suicide is the fools way out
hell im a strong man
and i dont and will not take the easy way out of anything
i always seem to take the most painfult way no matter how long it takes
but sometimes the easy way may be a good thing
but leaving is the stupidest most unthinkable thing you can choose
if you leave then who are you gonna give the knowledge that someone else may need to get throw life insted you will be gone ... then what?
they will be lost and confused and you cant say that someone else can tell them
well... no one thinks like someone else
so...no they cant know what one goes through completely
everyones life is different
so you choose if you want to be the one that was needed
but was nowhere to be found cause you took the quickest and easiest way out
the choice is yours and yours alone
no one can stop you
if your sure you want to leave but you
so listen to your heart and soul
it will tell you what is the right thing to do and who knows maybe...
you''ll like what it has to say
i have listened to my heart and soul
i choose to stay for now
but things do change and so does life.
think about it

By Erik Bützin [comments] => 0 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 19 [informant] => Rhino33 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
why leave when you can stay?

Contributed by Rhino33 on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 07:43:47 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



i wrote this because my best freind kyle killed himself this week and his mom
wanted me to say something @ the funeral and here is wat im plannin to say because
alot of the freinds of ours have been talkin bout commitin suicide since he died among others

why leave when you can stay?
*************************************

this is for all those that have wondered why life is so wrong and ungreatful to you
all those around you make it seem worse than what it really is
i understand i also have felt the same way
i'm in the same boat as all of you i am looked down
upon i am judged for every little thing i thing i try to do
i have tryed and i have failed
for those that think life would be better without you
think again

life has a cycle
if you leave
you break the cycle
that effects all those around you
more than you can ever know
if you leave this crule, painful place they call earth
then someone must go through the pain to fix the cycle
if that means one to even 100,000 people that have to go through pain
to fix the cycle on which you broke then so be it
but remember why would you want to put someone that didnt even cause you pain
through pain to fix the cycle you broke then so be it
but remember there are easier and better ways to fix the problem

hey im still here
do you think i havent thought about doing what you
may be thinking right now if you do
your dead wrong
i'll admit... I have almost succeeded at trying it
but suicide is the fools way out
hell im a strong man
and i dont and will not take the easy way out of anything
i always seem to take the most painfult way no matter how long it takes
but sometimes the easy way may be a good thing
but leaving is the stupidest most unthinkable thing you can choose
if you leave then who are you gonna give the knowledge that someone else may need to get throw life insted you will be gone ... then what?
they will be lost and confused and you cant say that someone else can tell them
well... no one thinks like someone else
so...no they cant know what one goes through completely
everyones life is different
so you choose if you want to be the one that was needed
but was nowhere to be found cause you took the quickest and easiest way out
the choice is yours and yours alone
no one can stop you
if your sure you want to leave but you
so listen to your heart and soul
it will tell you what is the right thing to do and who knows maybe...
you''ll like what it has to say
i have listened to my heart and soul
i choose to stay for now
but things do change and so does life.
think about it

By Erik Bützin




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