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Array ( [sid] => 91210 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unwilling to try [time] => 2005-04-16 21:14:44 [hometext] => omg someone please help me... I hope this works [bodytext] => Caught in this mess
That only she could make
Trapped within words
That only she would say
So what is a poor girl to do
When what came out was there
Or she thought it was at first
But now when she thinks about it
But doesn’t know what to do
Tries to fix it
But just digs herself in deeper
Wishing she could take it all back
Those words were unmeant
The correct feeling she lacks
What she thought was love
Well it just isn’t that
It’s something totally different
But unsure what it was
She said the first desperate thing that came to mind
Every time she screws up
She gets caught in the mess
Tangled and trapped like a fly in a web
She only wants to please
A mean girl she didn’t imagine she’d be
But how else to get you to stop and desist
How can I take back those words that I said
Why did previous hoping have to come true?
Does he not get that what was said was,,,
Well it should be a lie
She may think that she likes you
But really it may not be so
She just isn’t sure where she should go
She knows that it’s shallow
And that it isn’t fair
And that everything that you said
About everyone else
About changing their mind
If the option arose
Well its true for her it applies to her too
She isn’t proud of what has happened
And what she has done
She really isn’t as mean as she seems
But that’s hard to believe
Because it’s so inexcusable
That everything is wrong
Going out with you taking that leap
It may just be too big, too much to take
It’s too hard to see what the future will be
And if it wasn’t’ too late, then things would be the same
It would have fixed all the problems
To go back in time
And erase that one moment
Where my brain eased to my soul
No! I can’t go out with you
I just can’t, don’t ask why
The truth it is too sad
And I don’t want to lie
I cant help what I’ve done or said
But it happened, it’s too late
So please understand and forgive
I really think that you’re nice
But…well I just can’t spend
Another moment lying to you
It’s not fair and I know that it’s wrong
I wish it was over
I wish I was dead
Then I’d be through these bad times
And those words would be unsaid
Cause the truth is unknown
and I’m unwilling to try




[comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 21 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Unwilling to try

Contributed by spazz911 on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:14:44 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Caught in this mess
That only she could make
Trapped within words
That only she would say
So what is a poor girl to do
When what came out was there
Or she thought it was at first
But now when she thinks about it
But doesn’t know what to do
Tries to fix it
But just digs herself in deeper
Wishing she could take it all back
Those words were unmeant
The correct feeling she lacks
What she thought was love
Well it just isn’t that
It’s something totally different
But unsure what it was
She said the first desperate thing that came to mind
Every time she screws up
She gets caught in the mess
Tangled and trapped like a fly in a web
She only wants to please
A mean girl she didn’t imagine she’d be
But how else to get you to stop and desist
How can I take back those words that I said
Why did previous hoping have to come true?
Does he not get that what was said was,,,
Well it should be a lie
She may think that she likes you
But really it may not be so
She just isn’t sure where she should go
She knows that it’s shallow
And that it isn’t fair
And that everything that you said
About everyone else
About changing their mind
If the option arose
Well its true for her it applies to her too
She isn’t proud of what has happened
And what she has done
She really isn’t as mean as she seems
But that’s hard to believe
Because it’s so inexcusable
That everything is wrong
Going out with you taking that leap
It may just be too big, too much to take
It’s too hard to see what the future will be
And if it wasn’t’ too late, then things would be the same
It would have fixed all the problems
To go back in time
And erase that one moment
Where my brain eased to my soul
No! I can’t go out with you
I just can’t, don’t ask why
The truth it is too sad
And I don’t want to lie
I cant help what I’ve done or said
But it happened, it’s too late
So please understand and forgive
I really think that you’re nice
But…well I just can’t spend
Another moment lying to you
It’s not fair and I know that it’s wrong
I wish it was over
I wish I was dead
Then I’d be through these bad times
And those words would be unsaid
Cause the truth is unknown
and I’m unwilling to try








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Re: Unwilling to try (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:28:24 PM AEST
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gosh kc, all you have to do is say no. its really not that hard. you heard every word he said to me... even though you werent suppossed to. it will be awkward afterward, but wouldnt it be more awkward to say yes? and then go out with him and forever regret saying it just to please him? you obviously didnt mean it wen you sed you liked him. but if you did its okay to admit it. ill luv u no matter what. dont worry kc, it will work out. you just have to have some confidence (i know thats a tough task but just try), gather your courage and say no. you dont like him. you dont want to go out with him and thats not going to change. YOU have to tell him, he wont believe me, he has to hear it from you. gosh this is long.
best of luck my friend,
jennie*


Re: Unwilling to try (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetie4u2u on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:40:03 PM AEST
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yea..i like your poem..i dont think the girl who wrote your first comment quite understood tho...iz this poem even about u??? lol but keep doin wat u do iight ~1~




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