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Array ( [sid] => 91224 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Locked Inside [time] => 2005-04-16 22:43:05 [hometext] => I write this from the heart- that is all. [bodytext] => All of my feelings
Locked inside of me
It’s like someone stealing
Your life away from you

It hurts me deeply
So much that it makes me
Feel sleepy
Let me rest my head now and never wake up again

The emotions of frustration and sadness
Locked inside of me
The emotions of confusion and madness
Locked inside of me

I can’t let the feelings out
It’s too hard for me
I’m not in doubt
That it won’t work out

My feelings confuse even me
How would you understand?
When even I, myself, don’t understand me?
It would just confuse you, too

My feelings are locked inside
There’s no use looking for the key
For I have deeply locked them inside
Too deep for you to reach

It’s too late for me now
But you can still save yourself
Don’t ask me how
For I have locked myself out

Don’t ask me to tell you
What’s wrong
For it’s true
My feelings are locked inside

I’ve locked myself away
From you, from everyone
Just leave me alone and go away
It’s too much for me to handle

My feelings are locked inside
There is no releasing my feelings
They are locked inside
I can’t let them go
They are locked inside

I can’t tell you why
I can’t tell you how
All I can say is ‘bye
For my feelings are locked inside
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Locked Inside

Contributed by sprinter27 on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:43:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



All of my feelings
Locked inside of me
It’s like someone stealing
Your life away from you

It hurts me deeply
So much that it makes me
Feel sleepy
Let me rest my head now and never wake up again

The emotions of frustration and sadness
Locked inside of me
The emotions of confusion and madness
Locked inside of me

I can’t let the feelings out
It’s too hard for me
I’m not in doubt
That it won’t work out

My feelings confuse even me
How would you understand?
When even I, myself, don’t understand me?
It would just confuse you, too

My feelings are locked inside
There’s no use looking for the key
For I have deeply locked them inside
Too deep for you to reach

It’s too late for me now
But you can still save yourself
Don’t ask me how
For I have locked myself out

Don’t ask me to tell you
What’s wrong
For it’s true
My feelings are locked inside

I’ve locked myself away
From you, from everyone
Just leave me alone and go away
It’s too much for me to handle

My feelings are locked inside
There is no releasing my feelings
They are locked inside
I can’t let them go
They are locked inside

I can’t tell you why
I can’t tell you how
All I can say is ‘bye
For my feelings are locked inside




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Re: Locked Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:53:05 PM AEST
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no no no no.... you have to open up to get the feeling out. if you hold it in all of the time, it will only build and bring more pain. ive learned that talking to ppl helps a lot. not like, a therapist or anything, but to just your friends who DO care, believe it or not. im here for you if you EVER need to talk, you understand? dont give up on me ok? openness is one of the major steps in healing yourself. being able to talk about what bothers you, what brings you such pain. dont block your friends out, they're here to help you and want to help you. please be open... you cant talk to me and be honest i wont judge you on anything. great write anyhow. i think i fergot to mention that lol.
luv n hugs,
jennie*


Re: Locked Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:53:15 PM AEST
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you need not repeat what you say so often or even rephrase it in other ways so often. when you say the same thing over this many times, the words lose meaning, and the piece is just too redundant for enjoyment. not even a song is this redundant. your emotions are only emotions, and they shouldnt dominate your life. even if you are confused, that doesnt mean others are not.


Re: Locked Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:26:17 PM AEST
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i thought that locking things up inside me would help.....i didn't i spent months on end in the ***** up hell i brought upon myself but ive slowly begun to realize that i no u wont believe me neways i didnt when peep told me but it is helping i am no where near open but im getting there, just hold on and let go....confusing i no but dont give up
~kc~




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