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[aid] => mick
[title] => Rock Bottom
[time] => 2005-04-18 22:31:48
[hometext] => something i'm trying to deal with...comments plzzzz
[bodytext] => How the hell can you tell me what I should do?
When you don’t even know, what it is I’m going through?
It’s a mental illness, you know a disease
So just leave me alone, would ya please?
I need some help, yes that I’ll admit
Cuz I can’t stand feeling, always like *****
It’s hard to keep fighting, so much easier to give in
I’m almost at the point, where I don’t care if suicide’s a sin!
It’s not just one thing that bothers me
It’s everything, can’t you see?
What would happen if I would die today?
Would anyone come to see where I would lay?
I hope not, I’d rather be forgotten
While I’m 6 feet underground, rottin’
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[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
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[topicname] => selfstruggles
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Rock Bottom
Contributed by
o7neves
on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 10:31:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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How the hell can you tell me what I should do?
When you don’t even know, what it is I’m going through?
It’s a mental illness, you know a disease
So just leave me alone, would ya please?
I need some help, yes that I’ll admit
Cuz I can’t stand feeling, always like *****
It’s hard to keep fighting, so much easier to give in
I’m almost at the point, where I don’t care if suicide’s a sin!
It’s not just one thing that bothers me
It’s everything, can’t you see?
What would happen if I would die today?
Would anyone come to see where I would lay?
I hope not, I’d rather be forgotten
While I’m 6 feet underground, rottin’
Copyright ©
o7neves
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2005-04-18 22:31:48]
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 11:06:43 PM AEST
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powerful write. do not leave this world yet. do not give up hope. i have faith in you!! email me if you would like to talk.
The Voice
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 11:29:26 PM AEST
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wow a very sad and raw write
i can honestly relate to ur pain and feel like leaving this world also as i have a mental disease 2...u kno u need help but sometimes just wanna give up
i reeli liked this plz try 2 b strong and contact me anytime if u need to talk bcuz i can reeli relate |
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:10:36 AM AEST
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What a honest and expressive write, and I honestly can relate , it is a devastating disease but their is always hope, I wish you the best and dont give up you are a beautiful child of god
Hugs
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 10:39:41 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this. Awesome poem. Try and not do it. I have been feeling the same way but I am trying.
Scott |
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by LaDyD on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:57:03 PM AEST
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| very deep.... you know ill always be here for you babe |
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by Erik79 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 10:39:18 PM AEST
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| Excellently written. Do not give up on life or yourself. I'll always be here for you. I'm just a call away. |
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by animusutputo on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 05:05:30 PM AEST
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it is Never one thing.. it is as simple as having to take a breath... because it reminds you that you are alive in the forsaken world...
Weird cause i have thought the same thing... i have planned my own funeral in my head.. thinkin what people would feel.. would they even care?
There are beautiful moments in life tho... the moment when you meet someone.. and there is a connection.. that is beautiful because it is rare.. the moment you Love and Love someone.. is it all worth it... thats the question...
I like this one =) |
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by CurtisC on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 04:23:25 PM AEST
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very deep and powerful write but you can't be thinkin like that...you're still so young and have so much more ahead of you, it can't get worse than it is now, why would you let it? it can only get better from here....the world is what you make it, think negative and that's what it'll be, but if think positive and live in the moment everything will always workout...life just sucks sometimes but it's just like that..
hang in there dear, you'll get through this...i'm always here if you wanna talk to someone and you know that....
Curtis |
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