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C-U-T, C-U-T,C-U-T,cut
Contributed by
jtkzlimz
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:57:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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C, is for the care that i feel just isn't there.
U, is for the unreal pain that i feel inside.
T, is for the tempers that can never be controlled
C-U-T, C-U-T, C-U-T,CUT
I feel this is the only way my pain can be controlled.
It hurts just for a second then the pain is gone.
All I see is red and tears, and all my fears are gone.
But one day soon the tears will stop all my fears then gone.
The blood no longer then shall spill, the care will soon be real.
Unreal pain will be felt no more, the tempers now controlled.
But three wrongs don't make a right, you can't bring back that night.
Too shallow is better than too deep, a little blood then a lot.
The blood just wouldn't stop, yelling, tears, blood, pain, fears.
C-U-T, C-U-T, C-U-T, CUT
Yelling, CUT, Tears, CUT, Blood,CUT, Pain,CUT, Fears,CUT, CUT, CUT
Too shallow was the cut, the deeper it got the more the blood wouldn't stop
Now there's none left to spill, the pain was just too real.
Tick Tock went the clock, too late to realize
Beep, Beep, Beeeeep too late now i'm gone
Copyright ©
jtkzlimz
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2005-04-19 19:57:23]
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Re: C-U-T, C-U-T,C-U-T,cut
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by brokengirl on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:49:55 PM AEST
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| very powerful and sounds like u have very strong feelings about it. Good write I like the ending....it got a strong picture in my head. |
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Re: C-U-T, C-U-T,C-U-T,cut
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by Moon_Kitten05_07 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:58:02 AM AEST
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i like it
why was you mad? |
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Re: C-U-T, C-U-T,C-U-T,cut
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by darkcutterBree on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:55:16 AM AEST
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this is amazing! i am so glad i read this! i cut and i know how it feels. did you get scared when you couldnt stopp the blood? it feels so good!you have alot of talent. i look forward to reading more from you! good work.!
xxxcuttsy |
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