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Float
Contributed by
Red_Silo
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 10:03:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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From the top of the highest mountain,
To the bottom of the sea,
It doesnt matter what you say you are,
You are what you will be.
Youre just a poser,
Making up your lines,
Youll wear this mask all your days,
Lying in wait for a great time,
And theyll never really know what you are.
The only things these people know is the gossip,
And it hasnt missed you by far.
Dirty bubble,
Cast yourself behind me!
Youve rusted away your locks,
Youre a waste of time and youre running free,
And I surely wish youd pop.
All the nice people have been taken now,
Or just maybe so it seems.
Or maybe its just not my time,
Or maybe they just dont like ME.
Either way there is always hope,
Ill never let that go.
Theres no need to rush this.
Just take off the mask and float.
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Red_Silo
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2005-04-19 22:03:55]
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Re: Float
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by b_rand on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 12:23:16 AM AEST
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| i don't really get the analogy, but i love the imagery. interesting point of view |
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Re: Float
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 08:17:14 PM AEST
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Hm...Interesting... Yes, the imagery is good! Good write!
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