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The candles light dances on the walls
My fingers play games like children in your hair

As your head rests on my chest
You fell sleep just over my heart
But I can still kiss your brow

And do so as much as I can
With out waking you
But I do wake you

Your eyes open and meet mine
And all my words are taken from me
And I am left speechless again

As you move upward
So your lips can meet mine
Do you want to steal my breath?

If so I am willing
I always am for anything
When it comes to being with you

We kiss and it feels like for ever
And for that I am grateful
As I am for all that you are

Your hand moves up to my face
We part and I warm it with a kiss
And then we kiss again

This means so much to me
I had an idea of how much before
But did not know its could be this

You mean so much to me
More than anything
You are everything to me

I can’t help but want you more
I can’t help but want more of you
But I can wait because till now

This is more than what I have ever wanted
This is more than what I could ever ask for
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Willing

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:14:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Shadows overcast around us in my bed
The candles light dances on the walls
My fingers play games like children in your hair

As your head rests on my chest
You fell sleep just over my heart
But I can still kiss your brow

And do so as much as I can
With out waking you
But I do wake you

Your eyes open and meet mine
And all my words are taken from me
And I am left speechless again

As you move upward
So your lips can meet mine
Do you want to steal my breath?

If so I am willing
I always am for anything
When it comes to being with you

We kiss and it feels like for ever
And for that I am grateful
As I am for all that you are

Your hand moves up to my face
We part and I warm it with a kiss
And then we kiss again

This means so much to me
I had an idea of how much before
But did not know its could be this

You mean so much to me
More than anything
You are everything to me

I can’t help but want you more
I can’t help but want more of you
But I can wait because till now

This is more than what I have ever wanted
This is more than what I could ever ask for




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Re: Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:24:13 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, i am left speechless, "And all my words are taken from me
And I am left speechless again "

*RS*


Re: Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 02:29:03 AM AEST
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Beautifull.
huggs,
emy


Re: Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 04:37:58 AM AEST
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Nicely done, man.

--Ghosty


Re: Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:04:11 AM AEST
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Two hearts entwined [spelt wrong sorry!]in this poem of love...
a beaut write that many like to relate to!
cheers!~


Re: Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:12:39 AM AEST
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Very nice write! So heartfelt and wracked with good feelings, what else could a love poem need? Keep it up.


Re: Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:17:01 AM AEST
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That was so beautifuly writen. I just loved this one.

Well done.

Jane~


Re: Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:56:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful feelings of love


Love Angelxxxx


Re: Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:11:51 AM AEST
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Great poem. You drew a great picture of thinking about the person you are in love with




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