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Array ( [sid] => 91652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => confusion of a desperate mind and love filled heart [time] => 2005-04-20 20:27:47 [hometext] => I'm writing this for someone and they know exactly who they are....this is just thought straight from my mind to paper [bodytext] => The emotions running through me are so intense,
I feel like screaming
I've known him for a longitme but only began to love him
around him it's hard breathing

Thoughts run ragged around my head
they can't seem to find a place to settle
I want it so badly I can almost taste it
but the life I'm walking in on is frail like a petal

I stare into that light and I see your heart break
I know what I feel , i can't mistake this love
I know you want it but are we being stupid
our love is strong like a warrior but is that enough? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ruthy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

confusion of a desperate mind and love filled heart

Contributed by ruthy on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 08:27:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The emotions running through me are so intense,
I feel like screaming
I've known him for a longitme but only began to love him
around him it's hard breathing

Thoughts run ragged around my head
they can't seem to find a place to settle
I want it so badly I can almost taste it
but the life I'm walking in on is frail like a petal

I stare into that light and I see your heart break
I know what I feel , i can't mistake this love
I know you want it but are we being stupid
our love is strong like a warrior but is that enough?

Copyright © ruthy ... [ 2005-04-20 20:27:47]
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Re: confusion of a desperate mind and love filled heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Nos_Bunny on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:07:31 PM AEST
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You shouldnt hurt yourself with these poems, they are beutiful and a good way to express but its sad to read them.

Re: confusion of a desperate mind and love filled heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthy on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:53:00 AM AEST
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I don't have anyone to tell how I feel.....and even if i did i cant have that "someone"...so the poem is what it is....away to escape...

Re: confusion of a desperate mind and love filled heart (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_chadow on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 02:50:52 PM AEST
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Aye, I know how you feel. Sometimes it hurts still.

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