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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => SUICIDE part 4
[time] => 2005-04-20 22:57:45
[hometext] => continued from part 3 this is dedicated to all those out there that thinks they wonna die. It's a spiritual war that can be won!
[bodytext] =>
  
SultryRose's Signatures
She came around a few days later
after the shot. She realized how
those super natural beings walking
freely amongst her were many
she'd seen many, many times;
Right here on planet Earth in
human form. Thinking back from
the emergency room, she knew only
God could flash so many souls
at will that fast. She knew only heaven
could move that fast.
She found inner healing as she
let go of pain that had tortured
many life times. Ever since evil
Hitler had crucified so many Jews
in his man made hell. Finally she
could see the key that deliverd her
inner child that had been tortured
so many years. At that moment
she knew her White Knight
had fought them evil snakes and
won his damsal by destroying them
evil keys.
She knew with her key she'd find
peace in her Lancelot really soon.
Suddenl her cold heart melted as
lancelot's tenderness gave her
back her dignity by calling her Lady.
He gave her self respect she'd
she'd been cheated out of so long
before she could even walk or talk.
When Lancelot touched her, she
knew he'd been there all the time
"cause that touch to her said,
eternity.
Satan and all his little puky imps
had to leave her and her family
alone in Jesus name,
Amen!
Sighned, sealed
at the cross
Of Jesus,
her father.
[comments] => 14
[counter] => 254
[topic] => 36
[informant] => emystar
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 38
[ratings] => 8
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => Suicide
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by Shishke_Bob on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:05:57 PM AEST
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Amen to tha last part. this was very touching and am glade that it ended happely, even though it wasnt that way all the way through, its just like life... in most cases. this was well writing and your choice of words impecabla, please do post again.
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by heartless_soul on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:28:03 PM AEST
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interesting, I read the other three and found that half way through the second one you started to change its tone I still dont know way you posted these in suicide poems but it still had the idea I guess, any way they were well writing amoung the best that I'v read sence I'v been here. do keep it up.
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 01:22:40 AM AEST
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wow amazing write.
I am in like aww. |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:43:50 AM AEST
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Wow. This was really awesome and so filled with hope. Thank you so much for sharing these poems. It helps.
Scott |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 06:03:14 AM AEST
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Oh Grrlfriend....you have certainly outdone yourself with these... Great series..
Hugs and thanks
Jenni |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:12:45 AM AEST
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An absolutely superb ending to this outstanding series of poems you've written Emy. Truly needed pieces that help with the emotional roller coaster rides we go on sometimes. Divine as always Emy.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by Pats4eva7 on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 09:22:10 PM AEST
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WOW! Those at the moment are the only words that come to my mouth after reading the "Suicide" series or poems you have written. I have also read other poems of yours, you truly have a gift that you should share with others and through you're words are able to help others in situations similar to yours and show them that they are not alone in their pain and that there are others out there like them, feeling what they feel. Keep up the work and I'll keep reading!
*melyssa* |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 03:08:30 AM AEST
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I am so impressed with this set of poems
You should quite rightly be proud of your work
well written and full of hope and power.
Johnny. |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:05:30 AM AEST
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I am glad I waited untill they were all done to read and comment. Tremendous message here Emy. Still, I hope the snake looses a few more of these battles due to what you have been drawn to create.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:30:49 PM AEST
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little Emy you doing a great work here! I loved the FOREVER sign at the beginning...and the fact that you told it like it really is. It's not God that kills us but his greatest Enemy.....Satan..........He was a liar and a slaughterer in the beginning, and he is taking more and more with each day.
I loved your format Emy.....You do excellent work little one
I love
momconsue |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by SocialMisfit on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 02:39:46 AM AEST
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emy, i seem to read your poems for a bit then forget to check back and when i do i always hatemyself for not reading your wonderfully touching poems sooner im ashamed of myself, these poems are just unspeakably cool, your just an awsome poetess keep it up :D
SM |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:26:47 PM AEST
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Bravo, what a wonderful message of hope and encouragement. Your poem, and spiritual focus, serves as an important form of evangelization.
A wonderful contribution, that can make a difference.
Will |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 06:21:59 PM AEST
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| I decided that it would make more sense to comment after reading all 4 parts then after each one. I believe that everybody has said everything i could think of writing. This work is amazing. Still in the dark place but i think that it might be getting a little bit better. I am a good swimmer by the way so drowning really probably wouldn't have worked for me. Thank you for sharing |
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Re: SUICIDE part 4
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:18:08 AM AEST
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Wonderful writes you captured every feeling to its maximum: hatred, hope, love, despair. Extremely powerful and well written. Nicely done!
--amanda-- |
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