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Onwards bounds I splash the chair!
Woops I say, please wipe away.
Todays the day I want to brighten okay?
Dab the brush without a rush.
Get the roller out and swirl the room lush.
The telephone rings the voice it sings.
Is my mother in law she brings me things.
To help me out in my mess all about,
Like an angel she cleans I don't even shout.
Finally finishing this long day I'm wishing
I'd rather be in my bed with my hubby I'm missing!

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Paint My Day Away

Contributed by inoc on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:27:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Paint in my hair, hey I don't care.
Onwards bounds I splash the chair!
Woops I say, please wipe away.
Todays the day I want to brighten okay?
Dab the brush without a rush.
Get the roller out and swirl the room lush.
The telephone rings the voice it sings.
Is my mother in law she brings me things.
To help me out in my mess all about,
Like an angel she cleans I don't even shout.
Finally finishing this long day I'm wishing
I'd rather be in my bed with my hubby I'm missing!

~~

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2005-04-21 05:27:35]
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Re: Paint My Day Away (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 06:48:14 AM AEST
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LOL this is a cute write, very creative.
Thanks for posting.

Jane~

Re: Paint My Day Away (User Rating: 1 )
by WoodyMc44 on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:22:40 AM AEST
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I like this, I like reading about everyday things that occur with a flare of fun, more so when its something that I'm sure was frustrating, thanks for the write, Woody

Re: Paint My Day Away (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:40:52 AM AEST
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Inoc this was a very creative and enjoyable piece of poetry. I loved it. It truly brought a smile to my face. Well done dear friend on an excellent poem.
Hugs,
~Sue~

Re: Paint My Day Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:15:06 AM AEST
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awwww this is sooo cute!!

Very well done and such great flow!!!

Re: Paint My Day Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 03:31:50 AM AEST
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You know Coni ... this was a light adorable write ... but I think the hubby has the right idea ...

Nazzy ~

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