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finding myself in a world unseen
With every step I took, brought
me closer to the very beginning

Within the dream,I was entrapped
Reaching outwards for someone to
hear me, walking endlessly. this
dream didn't end

I continued to run, and run
But all there was, was circles
making me travel back to where
I was once again.

Feeling the depths and suffocation
like you are drowning, and you cannot
escape, the cycle remained infinite
where there was no end, and no
beginning.
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Dream of Infinity

Contributed by justingunshin on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:51:48 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

In this dream, my eyes opened
finding myself in a world unseen
With every step I took, brought
me closer to the very beginning

Within the dream,I was entrapped
Reaching outwards for someone to
hear me, walking endlessly. this
dream didn't end

I continued to run, and run
But all there was, was circles
making me travel back to where
I was once again.

Feeling the depths and suffocation
like you are drowning, and you cannot
escape, the cycle remained infinite
where there was no end, and no
beginning.

Copyright © justingunshin ... [ 2005-04-21 10:51:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dream of Infinity (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 12:53:15 PM AEST
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ok I just had to comment. I couldn't help but noticing that as I read this you had 24 reads, 2 votes of a 5, yet no comments????
*befuddled*

This is a nice gentle poem. I feel it ended too soon, because there seems to be more to the story. But a good read nonetheless. :-)

Welcome to YPDC! I look forward to reading more of your work.

Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: Dream of Infinity (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:17:55 PM AEST
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I thought you did a great job justin.
It could be alittle longer but oh well.
you did really well.

hugs

love mom

Re: Dream of Infinity (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:50:29 PM AEST
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a great poem, I hope to read much more from you :)

pix xx

Re: Dream of Infinity (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:41:47 PM AEST
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*giggles* I just posted a poem about dreaming a couple days ago

This poem is great though :D I love it, does seem a tad short, but still I loved it

I hope you keep writing poems like this and your last one, you're great :D

Love ya,
~Kiela~

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