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What you mean in my life
Your living testimony
To the beauty and wonders life holds
You dont know this
Because I dont know how to tell you
But you saved me
I have never felt like this before
I felt true love for the first time
But I can only imagine
If this feeling were mutual
You inspire me...
And you are my muse [comments] => 6 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 2 [informant] => TheLoner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

My Muse

Contributed by TheLoner on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 03:09:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I wrote this to tell you
What you mean in my life
Your living testimony
To the beauty and wonders life holds
You dont know this
Because I dont know how to tell you
But you saved me
I have never felt like this before
I felt true love for the first time
But I can only imagine
If this feeling were mutual
You inspire me...
And you are my muse

Copyright © TheLoner ... [ 2005-04-22 03:09:41]
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Re: My Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by crap_snapper on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 04:46:20 AM AEST
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I like the mood and the sentiment of the poem, I think poetry is about the way you say something rather than what you actually say and so this poem is maybe a little simplistic. But that will surly improve over time. At least I hope it will with what I write. Keep it up.

Re: My Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:26:53 AM AEST
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I actually like this one. You have alot of potential in writing poetry. You've definately got what it takes. This poem is short, sweet and to the point. I think you're better of telling this particular Miss how u really feel about her.
Hugs,
~Sue~

Re: My Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by marshmalloska on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:38:04 AM AEST
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I think that a poetry is what you make it, and what you say matters just as much as how you say it, although you said it well. I just hope that how you feel is reciprocated =)

Re: My Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:49:55 AM AEST
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Nice very nice.
I wouldn't change a thing....

Re: My Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 12:57:09 PM AEST
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good poem, inspirational to those who should always express themselves to the ones they fall for

Re: My Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:55:06 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.....I hope this site brings you as much enjoyment as it brings the poets here.
I love how you write this and I will definitely look forward to more of your work.
Jenni

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