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Array ( [sid] => 91976 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tears From Love [time] => 2005-04-23 10:43:44 [hometext] => It hurts to lose someone. [bodytext] => Dark and deep are the depths of my soul
They run straight down to nothing but cold
My heart is hard and my stare is cold
My mind is lost and out of control
I’m lost in pain as I sit it in the cold
But this hate inside me will make me whole
My thoughts run deep down to nothing but rage
From this love I once had and this love I once gave
I gave it so blindly with nothing to hide
Lost in here love and lost in my pride
Lost in her eyes as she took my soul
Lost in my mind as I gave her control
Her heart was cold as she watched me cry
She ripped out my heart and walked out of my life
Now I’m left in darkness with nothing but grief
As my tears of pain run down to my feet
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Tears From Love

Contributed by sride686 on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:43:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Dark and deep are the depths of my soul
They run straight down to nothing but cold
My heart is hard and my stare is cold
My mind is lost and out of control
I’m lost in pain as I sit it in the cold
But this hate inside me will make me whole
My thoughts run deep down to nothing but rage
From this love I once had and this love I once gave
I gave it so blindly with nothing to hide
Lost in here love and lost in my pride
Lost in her eyes as she took my soul
Lost in my mind as I gave her control
Her heart was cold as she watched me cry
She ripped out my heart and walked out of my life
Now I’m left in darkness with nothing but grief
As my tears of pain run down to my feet

Copyright Â© sride686 ... [ 2005-04-23 10:43:44]
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Re: Tears From Love (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:59:56 AM AEST
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this was ok, but the over use of the word cold made the poem read a bit funny. Keep posting, I look forward to reading more
pix xx

Re: Tears From Love (User Rating: 1 )
by trustisajoke on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:03:47 PM AEST
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I think your poem was amazing. Your feeling's were put down so well. I can realate to this poem and i loved it. Good job keep writting!
-T.S-

Re: Tears From Love (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:26:44 PM AEST
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So full of emotions that are forcefully felt. i especially dig the last two lines as the "tears run down to the feet." Very nice and keep it up.

Re: Tears From Love (User Rating: 1 )
by broken_hearted_loser on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:34:55 PM AEST
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The poem really, came out at me. Amazing poem . Keep writing! Just try not to use one word, so many times! 'cold' . Overall it was great! I look forward to more of your poems!

Re: Tears From Love (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:27:46 PM AEST
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Sorry 4 your pain sad but well stated from the heart . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Tears From Love (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 03:15:46 AM AEST
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Aww Steve this is a deep, sad and heart breaking write. I feel ur pain and anguish for I can relate to it so much. This poem is deeply expressed and shows how much ur heart is sharded and in pain. My thoughts and prayers are with u my dear friend.
I commend u on being able to put pen to paper after feeling such a loss.
A hundred of heartfelt hugs 'n' prayers for you,
~sue~

Re: Tears From Love (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:02:50 PM AEST
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I feel your pain and I know how hard it is. The feelings you express in this poem are, unfortunatly, very familiar to me and I understand completly. Since I can relate very well, feel free to send me a message any time that you need to talk. I will listen because I know how important it is to talk about this sort of thing. Well it helps me at least and maybe it will make you feel better too. Anyways great poem and very well stated. : )

~Brenna~

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