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Array ( [sid] => 91999 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I WANT TO STEAL YOU FROM THE ONE YOU LOVE [time] => 2005-04-23 13:25:26 [hometext] => ~Sometimes LOVE can overpower us~ [bodytext] => Let me steal you from the one you love
In hopes that as time passes you''ll love me.
So deeply does your smile my heart move
That merely touching you is ecstasy.
Normally, such crimes are not my style,
Nor would I infidelity propose;
But I love you so much I can''t revile
Anything that some slight hope bestows.
Let me show you how I''ll care for you,
How good it feels to have me at your side,
How spring eternal I''ll make ever new,
And every want or passing whim provide.
Try me out. I promise you''ll be mine
Once you see how bright my sun can shine.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => concrete_rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I WANT TO STEAL YOU FROM THE ONE YOU LOVE

Contributed by concrete_rose on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:25:26 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Let me steal you from the one you love
In hopes that as time passes you''ll love me.
So deeply does your smile my heart move
That merely touching you is ecstasy.
Normally, such crimes are not my style,
Nor would I infidelity propose;
But I love you so much I can''t revile
Anything that some slight hope bestows.
Let me show you how I''ll care for you,
How good it feels to have me at your side,
How spring eternal I''ll make ever new,
And every want or passing whim provide.
Try me out. I promise you''ll be mine
Once you see how bright my sun can shine.

Copyright © concrete_rose ... [ 2005-04-23 13:25:26]
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Re: I WANT TO STEAL YOU FROM THE ONE YOU LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:22:19 PM AEST
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The rhyme in this is good, as is the flow.
I think the words get a lot better toward the end, too.

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: I WANT TO STEAL YOU FROM THE ONE YOU LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:37:40 PM AEST
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The title...*smiles*

Good job, and in some ways I can relate.

Scorp.

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