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Array ( [sid] => 92007 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => your the victim [time] => 2005-04-23 14:38:31 [hometext] => this is just how i feel right now...please comment [bodytext] => im not the victim
of all the bad things in my life
im not the victim of all the depression deep inside
its not me im worried about
its you...how do you cope with my destructive ways
my habbits of breaking rules
i can play head games
its all very fun
i can do silence
i can do screaming
all these treatments
are just for you
you are the victim here
you might need someone to help you with me
i cannot be controlled
i do as i please
i am conditioned to think iam the victim
but really i know its you
you have to go home at night
with all my problems in your head
all the weight of depression pulling you down
the pity in my stomach and the hole in my heart
they all reverse onto you
i pity you
really i do
your the small person
the one left out
the one left behind
no one will help you
your all on your own
i can laugh insanely
as i normally do in the dead of night
i smile and all my problems float right onto you
their like curses
each one cast apon you
hahahha it feels good to know
im not the victim
i never was
never will be
its you on your own
stranded on you own little island surround with your own poisoned sea
aaah the relief is pleasureable
i feel so lifted
now your suicidal
now your the sick and twisted freak
and now i can skit you
your the victim...:)
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
your the victim

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 02:38:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



im not the victim
of all the bad things in my life
im not the victim of all the depression deep inside
its not me im worried about
its you...how do you cope with my destructive ways
my habbits of breaking rules
i can play head games
its all very fun
i can do silence
i can do screaming
all these treatments
are just for you
you are the victim here
you might need someone to help you with me
i cannot be controlled
i do as i please
i am conditioned to think iam the victim
but really i know its you
you have to go home at night
with all my problems in your head
all the weight of depression pulling you down
the pity in my stomach and the hole in my heart
they all reverse onto you
i pity you
really i do
your the small person
the one left out
the one left behind
no one will help you
your all on your own
i can laugh insanely
as i normally do in the dead of night
i smile and all my problems float right onto you
their like curses
each one cast apon you
hahahha it feels good to know
im not the victim
i never was
never will be
its you on your own
stranded on you own little island surround with your own poisoned sea
aaah the relief is pleasureable
i feel so lifted
now your suicidal
now your the sick and twisted freak
and now i can skit you
your the victim...:)




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Re: your the victim (User Rating: 1 )
by Dying_Angel on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 03:31:20 PM AEST
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wow this is the most twisted thing I have ever read...well done! :)


Re: your the victim (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 03:52:58 PM AEST
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Yeah, this really is twisted... Scary and cruel, too.
Youch.
Well...you were good at showing your feelings, I guess.

Phil


Re: your the victim (User Rating: 1 )
by disturbed_silence on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:33:29 PM AEST
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great poem, very nice


Re: your the victim (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 01:21:37 PM AEST
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this was twisted but a really good write. its makes you think, their is a lot of truth in these words. thank you for sharing yout heart with all who will read. take care....Steve




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