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Array ( [sid] => 92076 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Staring at Brick Wall [time] => 2005-04-24 01:32:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sit...I sit staring at a brick wall/ as tears fall..../ I don't want to be here at all/ Headaches and migranes take over
my body/ causing me to curl up in a ball/ Nobody here to offer me a hug/ nobody that I can call/ Can't even blink
to clean my eyeball/ so I sit here like a life size doll/ as i watch nightfall/ Feeling like a oddball/ because while
everyone else is sleep/ i'm stting here staring at drywall/ My life seem to get tossed around like a pinball/ pain
eating away at my existance like a mothball/ slouched all my life/ never really stood tall/ Ain't never got no money/
I hate going to the mall/ Never really felt bing..../ always seem to be small/ Never thought I would be anything if
I can recall/ never had my life going on a clear road, it was always a stonewall/ blocking me from moving forward/
instead it sent me to my pitfall/ wishing somebody could come and install/ a clean and clear hall/ that I can walk
down and not fall/ But until then/ I'll sit here, curled up in a ball/ as tears fall/ staring at a brick wall... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Justpoetic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Staring at Brick Wall

Contributed by Justpoetic on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:32:40 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I sit...I sit staring at a brick wall/ as tears fall..../ I don't want to be here at all/ Headaches and migranes take over
my body/ causing me to curl up in a ball/ Nobody here to offer me a hug/ nobody that I can call/ Can't even blink
to clean my eyeball/ so I sit here like a life size doll/ as i watch nightfall/ Feeling like a oddball/ because while
everyone else is sleep/ i'm stting here staring at drywall/ My life seem to get tossed around like a pinball/ pain
eating away at my existance like a mothball/ slouched all my life/ never really stood tall/ Ain't never got no money/
I hate going to the mall/ Never really felt bing..../ always seem to be small/ Never thought I would be anything if
I can recall/ never had my life going on a clear road, it was always a stonewall/ blocking me from moving forward/
instead it sent me to my pitfall/ wishing somebody could come and install/ a clean and clear hall/ that I can walk
down and not fall/ But until then/ I'll sit here, curled up in a ball/ as tears fall/ staring at a brick wall...




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Re: Staring at Brick Wall (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:17:09 AM AEST
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It so sad .. i have those day my self . good luck.. Don't stare at the brick wall paint it make it cheerful it a start by taking the block away.


Re: Staring at Brick Wall (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:30:36 AM AEST
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well done, well written




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