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I seen a shootin' star fly by.
I made a wish,
One for true love & happiness.
I know that wish came true,
'Cause I now have you.
You bring so much happiness to my life.
Someday in our future I will become your wife.
No matter if it's night or day,
I do as you say,
And look beyond the sky.
For there is always YOU & I.
So to all my friends I say,
When the day turns to night,
Look at the stars shinin' bright.
And if one should shoot across the sky,
Make a wish as it flies by.
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I Wished Upon A Shootin’ Star

Contributed by EROTICADARLIN on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 07:14:40 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

While lookin' at the night sky,
I seen a shootin' star fly by.
I made a wish,
One for true love & happiness.
I know that wish came true,
'Cause I now have you.
You bring so much happiness to my life.
Someday in our future I will become your wife.
No matter if it's night or day,
I do as you say,
And look beyond the sky.
For there is always YOU & I.
So to all my friends I say,
When the day turns to night,
Look at the stars shinin' bright.
And if one should shoot across the sky,
Make a wish as it flies by.

Copyright Â© EROTICADARLIN ... [ 2005-04-24 07:14:40]
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Re: I Wished Upon A Shootin’ Star (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:06:46 AM AEST
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It nice that your wish came true..

Re: I Wished Upon A Shootin’ Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:38:56 AM AEST
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nicely done

Re: I Wished Upon A Shootin’ Star (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 09:57:40 AM AEST
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that write was much better, sweet and lovely snetiments

pix xx

Re: I Wished Upon A Shootin’ Star (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:28:24 AM AEST
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Breath takingly beautiful. A pleasant and enjoyable read.
Hugs,
~sue~

Re: I Wished Upon A Shootin’ Star (User Rating: 1 )
by SageofHalo123330 on Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 09:18:17 PM AEST
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such a beautiful poem with a lot of hope thrown in. this kind of poetry is very refreshing to read. i hope that i can one day wish on a star and find such happiness.

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