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Array ( [sid] => 9214 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => If You Just Gave Me A Chance [time] => 2002-12-25 17:20:00 [hometext] => "HOPEFULLY THIS IS WERE THIS BELONGS .I guss this is an ok pome(not the best).hop you enjoy." [bodytext] => you told me you love me,
you told me you care,
you told me you love no one else but me,
you said nothing can tear our love a part,
and I believed you,
all this time I trusted you
and called you a "friend",
all this time I gave you everything I had,
but still that wasn't enough,
you wanted more,
thats no rason to leave me,
thats no reason to make me feel
like the devil took my soul,
thats no reason to make me feel
like I'm going through hell,
I know if you just gave me a chance,
I can give you everything you want

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 48 [informant] => tollo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

If You Just Gave Me A Chance

Contributed by tollo on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

you told me you love me,
you told me you care,
you told me you love no one else but me,
you said nothing can tear our love a part,
and I believed you,
all this time I trusted you
and called you a "friend",
all this time I gave you everything I had,
but still that wasn't enough,
you wanted more,
thats no rason to leave me,
thats no reason to make me feel
like the devil took my soul,
thats no reason to make me feel
like I'm going through hell,
I know if you just gave me a chance,
I can give you everything you want

Copyright © tollo ... [ 2002-12-25 17:20:00]
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Re: If You Just Gave Me A Chance (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 07:21:05 PM AEST
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I THINK THAT THIS POEM IS VERY TOUCHING. ALTHOUGH THOSE VERY SAME WORDS COULD ALSO BE USED TOWARDS SOEM ONE WHO ALREADY GAVE YOU A CHANCE BUT YOU JUST WANT A SECOND CHANCE ON THE RELATIONSHIP THAT SHOULD HAVE NEVA ENDED IN THE FIRST PLACE. YA KNOW

Re: If You Just Gave Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by emmafarah on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 03:24:02 AM AEST
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i like this...cool.. but listen to me, he dose NOT deserve u

Re: If You Just Gave Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by EndEformEtrancE on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 09:20:12 AM AEST
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oooh i love all that bitterness and raw emotion, well done for harnessing it in a poem!

Re: If You Just Gave Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 09:58:13 PM AEST
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Wow this is so beautiful....it's so sweet to write this to someone you care about so deeply, I hope whomever you wrote this see's t his because it's so beautiful...i know if someone was saying they wanted another chance with me like this that i would definately give some deep thought and talk it over with them ......and Anonymous whomever you are i think that you should be more open minded....i truly beleive this came from tollo's heart....some people have to hard of a time asking for another chance and i admire the fact that tollo asked....and in such beautiful wording......thanks for sharing your beautiful words tollo....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

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