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ive grown too dark and too cold to continue this fight
life's too tough for me though i cant explain
no one understands me and its driving me insane
so late tonight when the clock does strike twelve
i'll silently slit my throat and get out of this earthly hell
with no one to protest my death ill never be missed
i feel that the end has come and it's time to end all this
goodbye cruel world and all that you have done
this is the last time that i will ever see the sun
i see the darkness begin to cover my eyes
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The Eclipse of my Life

Contributed by blue_angel on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:45:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

is this the last time that i will ever write?
ive grown too dark and too cold to continue this fight
life's too tough for me though i cant explain
no one understands me and its driving me insane
so late tonight when the clock does strike twelve
i'll silently slit my throat and get out of this earthly hell
with no one to protest my death ill never be missed
i feel that the end has come and it's time to end all this
goodbye cruel world and all that you have done
this is the last time that i will ever see the sun
i see the darkness begin to cover my eyes
the eclipsing of the sun will thus mark the end of life

Copyright © blue_angel ... [ 2005-04-25 10:45:31]
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Re: The Eclipse of my Life (User Rating: 1 )
by suicidal_imbecile on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:23:24 AM AEST
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Believe me dont do it... I definetly know how you feel, I'm a depressed girl who can't ever remember happiness, I tried to commit suicide aoubt 25 times ending in hospitals and doctors, its not fun. The first time i tried was when i was 5. If god wanted me to die he would have let me. God doesnt want you to die either. I dont want you to die. What used to make you happy? Try to find it and embrace it. If a certain animal did, spend time with it. if music does, listen to music, Find that specail thing and focus all your attention on it. Writings good, keep writing dont stop. I want to see another write from you later on. If you need to talk pm me..
kate

Re: The Eclipse of my Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:29:32 AM AEST
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Your giving up on yourself. Why? Everyone has value, including you. Think about it. Take care. Shey

Re: The Eclipse of my Life (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 08:49:30 PM AEST
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jenny u no i would miss u and u mean the world to me.... ur my sister and u no that no matter how bad it gets i am here even if it takes me awhile

Re: The Eclipse of my Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 05:44:54 AM AEST
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Jennie, what to say? You know that we here at the site care... and I know that doesn't matter much when your physical life at home can be (okay, is) so horrible. Is there anything we can do? If so, let us know.

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