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Array ( [sid] => 92278 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I still love you two [time] => 2005-04-26 00:15:11 [hometext] => writen for my wife and daughter on the one year of there passing. Aug 16, 2001 [bodytext] => I still love you two.

My only peace was knowing that you would be there
When I came in to the home that we did share
To greet you tight with a kiss
And to hold our girl that I did miss

But that was then before the now
So many things happened but when…how?
There in the hospital where you two died.
Here in this empty home I now hide

My life was over I could not live
But some how to the Lord, you two, I did give
I know that you are happy, I can feel it
But it is still to hard, on my life, not to quit

To see you again I will endure
To hold my family, this will ensure
And tell then this I will do
Because I still love you two.
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I still love you two

Contributed by heartless_soul on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:15:11 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I still love you two.

My only peace was knowing that you would be there
When I came in to the home that we did share
To greet you tight with a kiss
And to hold our girl that I did miss

But that was then before the now
So many things happened but when…how?
There in the hospital where you two died.
Here in this empty home I now hide

My life was over I could not live
But some how to the Lord, you two, I did give
I know that you are happy, I can feel it
But it is still to hard, on my life, not to quit

To see you again I will endure
To hold my family, this will ensure
And tell then this I will do
Because I still love you two.

Copyright Â© heartless_soul ... [ 2005-04-26 00:15:11]
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Re: I still love you two (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:20:15 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful and so touching..I am soooo sorry for your loss...I can't begin to imagine your pain...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: I still love you two (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:41:15 AM AEST
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Very heart breaking write but written well.
I too am sorry for your loss.
huggs, strength,
emy

Re: I still love you two (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:06:18 AM AEST
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This is so sad. I could not possibly imagine what it would be like to lose my daughter (I never want to know). I hope that someday you can make it out of the empty house in which you hide. I think both your wife and daughter would be pleased to see you happy again.

Re: I still love you two (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 01:38:02 PM AEST
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Im so very sorry I couldnt imagine this pain very well written and so expressive
Michelle

Re: I still love you two (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:27:54 PM AEST
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Very touching and beautifully written, sorry to hear about your loss, but glad you havent given up.

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