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Array ( [sid] => 92346 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i like abuse [time] => 2005-04-26 18:07:13 [hometext] => use me, abuse me, then leave me to die... [bodytext] => Itching my head
Out of confusion
Pull out my hair
It’s just an illusion
Gorge out my eyes
So I cannot see
Rid me of my name
For I am unworthy
Scratch at my skin
Until it bleeds
Starve me to death
On my flesh I will feed
Eat me alive
Beat me black and blue
Just give me pain
I’m immune to abuse
Stab me in the back
With a knife of hate
Hang me on a hook
Use me for bait
Just choke me to death
Please let me cry
Just slit my throat
And leave me to die
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 61 [informant] => blue_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

i like abuse

Contributed by blue_angel on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Itching my head
Out of confusion
Pull out my hair
It’s just an illusion
Gorge out my eyes
So I cannot see
Rid me of my name
For I am unworthy
Scratch at my skin
Until it bleeds
Starve me to death
On my flesh I will feed
Eat me alive
Beat me black and blue
Just give me pain
I’m immune to abuse
Stab me in the back
With a knife of hate
Hang me on a hook
Use me for bait
Just choke me to death
Please let me cry
Just slit my throat
And leave me to die

Copyright Â© blue_angel ... [ 2005-04-26 18:07:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: i like abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:26:42 PM AEST
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this gave me a chill so full of sadness and anger well you know what?? I have a big club and I use it on ppl who are making my friends feel bad so if you need me Iv got my club and Im a coming!!

(evil grins)
Michelle

Re: i like abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:47:18 PM AEST
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i have read this poem already so i have told u most of my comments on it but yet again i love how u write and keep hangin in here with me....
(ps he is leaving me alone)
~kc~

Re: i like abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 07:41:14 AM AEST
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Ohmigod Jennie, this is the most horrible poem you've ever written. I don't mean literary skills wise, in that case it's probably your best because it is way too visual and I don't like what I see. It's just that it's such a horrific vision.

No, I don't think you like abuse. I think you are so damned tired of it.

Before I'd read this poem - and Michelle's comment - I'd written a poem I posted today (hey, it's selfish self-promotion, but it fits for this situation. Poems called Arming for Battle). So, Michelle, I have a flamberge, which is a really long 76" sword and I know how to use it, so pick me up on your way.

Re: i like abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by PainfulSpirit06 on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 08:45:08 AM AEST
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I have been a situation where I felt just like you did. Keep up the good work.

Re: i like abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 05:32:57 PM AEST
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blue-angel
This vicous; I hope its just words and nothing ment by it.
With a name such as blue-angel I can't fantom where these thoughts come from.Keep writing and give us a touch of love.

Sinned

Re: i like abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Sunday, 9th September 2007 @ 10:17:56 AM AEST
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it's so wrong that some poeple have to go through this kind of thing
worte some stuff like this,
but not quite this, well, RAW.
good way to vent, stay with us here
Flamingblade

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