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Open Your Eyes
Contributed by
Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP)
on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Open your pretty eyes and look around my precious lass See with me, the jolly green of the soft and wide seas of grass Walk with me side by side, to find new gardens to grow Let me be by your side, and so I wont have to fear any sorrow Lets look upward and stare at the clear blue of the sky above See across the heavens the graceful fly of the whitest dove Feel the warm of the sun as it walks throughout the world Glance inside my own heart and find that is not that cold When I feel the touch of your silky soft hand around mine When you are around I feel drowsy as if I had drank wine Open your eyes and see that not everything is dark in my life Though all this time my heart was wounded by a great strife When I am with you, everything seems to be just too fine My lady, thats why my soul for all time will be thine, Never had I seen a light so bright as the one that in your eyes shine My pretty lady you are as beautiful as the vision of an angel As the stars in a silent night, as the wind that blows so joyful As the deep of the wide sea which looms so wonderful As the warmth of the solar beams that brings about the spring As the scent of many stunning flowers in a cold morning As the twinkle so mirthful of clear and pure water in a fountain As the shimmers of the sun on the top of the tallest mountain As the red painted horizon when the day turns to night Never in my whole life had I been this sure, but I am right Every time I say that I love you as I never had love anyone That is why I want to tell you how I feel, before you have gone Hope in me had died a long time ago, but in you I find strength Too keep walking in this life until I had ended all its length Open your eyes and allow me to be lost in their great beauty Open your eyes and with their kindness free me from guilty Open your eyes so I can glance inside you gentle and pure soul Open your eyes, and cleanse from my heart all that is foul Lets see what tomorrow has in store for us, lets see our fate Come with me, for my time is short, come with me before is to late Let me burn forever in the flames of your heart and let me blaze Let me in your arms forever be, covered in your loves haze Let me be by your side all time, until eternity take us away
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Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP)
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2002-12-26 00:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Open Your Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by DistortedSuicide on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 12:44:16 PM AEST (User
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I wished someone felt that way about me. This poem was very touching and I liked it alot. |
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Re: Open Your Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 01:51:26 AM AEST (User
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Wow what passion did this woman give to you to write so beautifully...this is so very beautiful, i hope she see's this it will surely take her entire breath away...ah....this is a masterpiece within itself and the visions you give here are breathtaking....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it tremendously...i look forward to reading more of your poetry ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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