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[aid] => mick
[title] => PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
[time] => 2005-04-27 01:32:52
[hometext] => I recently returned to my beautiful mountain home, which inspired this poem.........a wonderful dream indeed!
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PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
Ever ventured 'bove timberline......
Some 11,000 feet above mountain pine?
Nestled by a stream, just below,
My little cottage, close to a meadow.
Secluded, cozy, coy, and modest.
Inside, my stone fireplace is the warmest,
Can you smell the heavenly pine......
Hear the silence, 'cept the ripples divine?
Ne'r a breeze, no wind whine.....
Snowflakes float, not fall, in the winter time.
Blue Spruce tower, Aspen stand proud
Your heart beat-- can be heard aloud!
Exquisite delight of Peace.....
Nature's bountiful blessings never cease!
Tiny, moss-thatched roof retreat....
Designed for two would be complete.
Elk and deer water near our stream,
Early risers quietly observe downstream.
Squirrels scamper near, tame, no fear.
Blue Jays and Cardinals nest each year.
Sunbeams dance on ripples,
Lovely melodious sounds of giggles
Sensibilities cultivate keenness,
N'er a negative word of meanness!
May I trade that heavenly promise,
For an earthly paradise precious?
A little log cabin made for two,
Hand- built with love for me and you.
Created by
LovingCritters
ConSue
April 26, 2005
"Wilderness is not a luxury
but a necessity of the human spirit"
Edward Abbey quotes
(American writer)
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PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 01:32:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
Ever ventured 'bove timberline......
Some 11,000 feet above mountain pine?
Nestled by a stream, just below,
My little cottage, close to a meadow.
Secluded, cozy, coy, and modest.
Inside, my stone fireplace is the warmest,
Can you smell the heavenly pine......
Hear the silence, 'cept the ripples divine?
Ne'r a breeze, no wind whine.....
Snowflakes float, not fall, in the winter time.
Blue Spruce tower, Aspen stand proud
Your heart beat-- can be heard aloud!
Exquisite delight of Peace.....
Nature's bountiful blessings never cease!
Tiny, moss-thatched roof retreat....
Designed for two would be complete.
Elk and deer water near our stream,
Early risers quietly observe downstream.
Squirrels scamper near, tame, no fear.
Blue Jays and Cardinals nest each year.
Sunbeams dance on ripples,
Lovely melodious sounds of giggles
Sensibilities cultivate keenness,
N'er a negative word of meanness!
May I trade that heavenly promise,
For an earthly paradise precious?
A little log cabin made for two,
Hand- built with love for me and you.
Created by
LovingCritters
ConSue
April 26, 2005
"Wilderness is not a luxury
but a necessity of the human spirit"
Edward Abbey quotes
(American writer)
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Re: PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 01:58:18 AM AEST
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| Marvellous picture..quite entrancing ..very exquisite poem..It has created golden ripples in my imagination. How sweet to read such a beautiful composition..its heavenly.. hugs Connie :-) venkat |
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 02:01:45 AM AEST
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Sounds heavenly.
huggs,
yo brat,
emy |
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Re: PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 02:06:46 AM AEST
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GOD IT'S GREAT TO HAVE YOUR LOVING SELF BACK ON HERE! I LOVED THE POEM,& PROBRABLY WOULD LOVE THE SPOT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT TOO!! YOU DO BRING HAPPINESS & A BRIGHT LIGHT OF LOVE THAT SHINES ALL OVER THIS WEBSITE!!! THANK GOD YOU'RE BACK & READY TO GIVE US MORE!!!! WELCOME BACK-LOVINGCRITTERS-WE MISSED YA!!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 03:32:20 AM AEST
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| Truly beautiful & amazing poem...... Magnificant!!! |
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Re: PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 08:27:45 AM AEST
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Its beautiful consue.
And very well written you never disapoint.
great job.
hugs |
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Re: PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
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by EROTICADARLIN on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:09:14 AM AEST
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| Great poem and the pictures go wonderful with the poem. I love the country life! |
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Re: PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:48:13 PM AEST
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| Now I know why you were missed so much your wonderful! A poet at heart! Christina |
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Re: PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:45:49 AM AEST
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Ah so beautiful and delightful.!
Reminds me of the country of my birth. Pine, ripples, mountain peaks, alpine huts, just about every one of your beautiful lines is a reminder of days gone by.
Heartsick and homesick just reading it.
Marvellous words and pictures.
Thanks for sharing -
Love and peace
Elizabeth |
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Re: PINE CONES AND RIPPLES
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by Baronhawk on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:32:28 AM AEST
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| A beautiful place and a wonderful feeling, pine cones and ripples indeed. I envy you your rich life and splendid experience. It is as I often do that I only wish I can reach as splendid a place in both life and poetic resonance that you have so far reached. This is a wonderful write that captures not only the beautiful place that is your mountain lodge but also your bountiful life experience there. A very skillful use of imagery and topical nuance. |
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 05:58:14 AM AEST
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I agree with Ed Abbey and your beautiful poem - now That is living.
Spike |
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