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Heaven's Hold
Contributed by
jacobskk
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 08:14:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Heaven so bright,
With rainbows and sun.
Like a newborn angel.
And those streets made of gold,
That everyone talks about.
Castles touch the sky.
Fireworks of diamonds.
Clouds softer than silk.
Softer than cotton.
Softer than the skin of the newborn angel,
Birthed just a few words ago.
And flowers are already heavenly,
Especially roses.
Gold and redblue and pink
Theyre already there.
Rivers of liquid silk.
Rocks that cant hurt.
Swans that live forever.
Trees that grow for good.
Greens, that brighten the soil.
Kisses that linger forever.
Its all part of heavens hold.
No, wait
Nevermind.
Its one of your long hugs.
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jacobskk
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2005-04-27 20:14:33]
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Re: Heaven's Hold
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by Cupid on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:00:46 PM AEST
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This is sooo sweet, jacobskk.
It's also very cute.
I love the description in this.
It does seem very heavenly.
Keep up the great work! |
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Re: Heaven's Hold
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:10:28 PM AEST
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So heavenly beauitful. Breath taking and amazing. A truly well written poem.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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